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TheNumber12LooksLikeMe 01-14-2006 01:54 PM

Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral(rough draft)
 
Surgeon.Surgery.Funeral


Our velvet skin tears so easily

in these ultraviolet windshield wipers

I want you to read this a million times

the ballad of a boy noone cared about

between sunsets I invent new ways

for things to break

the things we believe in are

only distortions of our fragile

reality

Science fails us once again

take another sip of your cyanide martini

drive ten miles faster for me

maybe we can crash this car before

sundown

call the surgeon

we need an operation

sleepy jack 01-14-2006 01:55 PM

Very good for the rought draft, i like the ending quite a bit.

either/or 01-14-2006 09:04 PM

i think i've heard a few of those lines used before in other songs.

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe 01-15-2006 10:34 AM

no you haven't

TrampInaTux 01-15-2006 10:47 AM

Yeah it's good. I like it a lot, and like misfits I also think the ending is cool. Is this the old TheNumber12LooksLikeMe, or a new one?

Crazy Luv 01-15-2006 11:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheNumber12LooksLikeMe
no you haven't

:laughing: how you gonna tell him he hasnt

creepinson 01-15-2006 05:22 PM

it looks familiar... and thats not good

right-track 01-15-2006 05:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by either/or
i think i've heard a few of those lines used before in other songs.

I've heard all of those words in other songs before...just not in that order.

It's miserable...I like it.

creepinson 01-15-2006 06:02 PM

of course you have dumbass... HOLY SHIT WINDSHIELD WIPERS... WHO THE HELL CAME UP WITH THAT??!!?!?!!!111 its about the final product idiot

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe 01-15-2006 06:48 PM

I mean sure some of those words youve obviously heard
but my lines are original

and yes it is me hobojesus


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