a song for you (sing a song, quote, Hang)

crashingsun · 01-12-2006, 08:59 AM

out of the way or keep moving on
you might make a knight but you're still a pawn
running in circles all the time
you must get dizzy when waking down the line

you say that the world is cold
so take off your coat -- don't grow old
smile for your warmth and learn to shine
just turn off the light after nine

CHORUS
i know what you're going to say
and i think that it's okay
i know when you're feeling blue
i can sing a song for you

i know that your hair fell out
your vision is blurred and you just stare about
your heart might fail and it's hard to hear
that's what you get for drinking everclear

i know that it burns inside
but that's just the price that you paid for your ride
there's still no cure but ease your strife
you can still lead a normal life

CHORUS

turn with the wheel that presses on
spinning the world but still can't find the dawn
running in circles all the time
you must get dizzy when walking down the line

CHORUS

Crazy Luv · 01-12-2006, 02:55 PM

i like it, but can you explain this part to me...

Quote:

you say that the world is cold
so take off your coat -- don't grow old
smile for your warmth

if the person "takes off their coat", then what "warmth" are they going to have against the "cold" world? & where did growing up come into this?

& this part...

Quote:

i know when you're feeling blue
i can sing a song for you

...sounds like your comforting yourself, or is it suppose to be like that?

crashingsun · 01-13-2006, 08:57 AM

Quote:

if the person "takes off their coat", then what "warmth" are they going to have against the "cold" world? & where did growing up come into this?

"smile for your warmth"
it's saying "don't grow old," not "grow up"

Quote:

...sounds like your comforting yourself, or is it suppose to be like that?

this is a song for you, not for me

thanks for the thoughts

either/or · 01-14-2006, 05:06 AM

drinking is a curse my brothers. some lines could be changed though.
turn off the light after nine- kinda childish in a way, i dunno felt wierd.

Crazy Luv · 01-15-2006, 01:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by crashingsun

"smile for your warmth"
it's saying "don't grow old," not "grow up"

this is a song for you, not for me

thanks for the thoughts

i still think you need to reword...

Quote:

you say that the world is cold
so take off your coat -- don't grow old

& i know the song was meant for someone, not for yourself, but that particular part still sounds like you're comforting yourself...if its meant to comfort the other person, shouldnt it be something along the terms of...
i know what you're going to say
and i think that it's okay
You know when you're feeling blue
i can sing a song for you

01-12-2006, 08:59 AM	#1 (permalink)
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01-14-2006, 05:06 AM	#4 (permalink)
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