dont got a title yet (lyrics, dance, rock, effect)

creepinson · 01-10-2006, 07:31 PM

dude... its all cliches and the repetition is pretty bad....

i really dislike that whole contradiction thing you got going on... cuz you just give up on it and it ruins the whole piece... and never end with two homonyms... especially twotoo

go dance or something

Crazy Luv · 01-10-2006, 07:38 PM

you like the word dude huh

how do i give it up?
not going on defensive mode, just wondering, im trying to make it better. thats why i need reviews.

i do dance, but i like to write. just started, so im working at it.

01-10-2006, 07:31 PM	#1 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	dude... its all cliches and the repetition is pretty bad.... i really dislike that whole contradiction thing you got going on... cuz you just give up on it and it ruins the whole piece... and never end with two homonyms... especially twotoo go dance or something

01-10-2006, 07:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 364	you like the word dude huh how do i give it up? not going on defensive mode, just wondering, im trying to make it better. thats why i need reviews. i do dance, but i like to write. just started, so im working at it.