My Bad song titled "65th Floor" (quote, songs)

17lH_8791_Pl38 · 01-10-2006, 02:46 PM

This is my first song I have written. I dont think its very good
Please give me your opinion.

Its going through his head over and over again
he says the time is now to end it all
He is thinking about his family his Wife and his two sons
his freinds and his parents when his gone

CHORUS
His looking out the window of the 65th floor
his ready to say goodbye to the world and end it all
well his looking out the window of the 65th floor
his ready to say goodbye and end it all

As he walks up the stairs to his appartment room door
he conts the steps on his way
he opens the door and he walks in the room
hes going to leave the world his own way

CHORUS

Well he walks out to the balcony and he takes a deep breath
Takes a last look at the World he knew
and he steps up on the balconys ledge
He says goodbye and falls down to his death

CHORUS

Well there it is my very bad song.

01-10-2006, 02:46 PM	#1 (permalink)
17lH_8791_Pl38 Groupie Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 20	My Bad song titled "65th Floor" This is my first song I have written. I dont think its very good Please give me your opinion. Its going through his head over and over again he says the time is now to end it all He is thinking about his family his Wife and his two sons his freinds and his parents when his gone CHORUS His looking out the window of the 65th floor his ready to say goodbye to the world and end it all well his looking out the window of the 65th floor his ready to say goodbye and end it all As he walks up the stairs to his appartment room door he conts the steps on his way he opens the door and he walks in the room hes going to leave the world his own way CHORUS Well he walks out to the balcony and he takes a deep breath Takes a last look at the World he knew and he steps up on the balconys ledge He says goodbye and falls down to his death CHORUS Well there it is my very bad song.