Fear and delight (Kiss, effect, quote, song)

creepinson · 01-10-2006, 05:31 PM

gabbahey there we go... lol i got banned till thursday or something

Ma Cherie · 01-11-2006, 11:30 AM

either way, i put them because in other forums use of word people don't under stand(yes there are those ignorant enougth to ask what they mean)
fussed because they did not know, and in poetry all word are fair game to be used how ever you wish to use them, so long as the flow is not disturbed.

trust me i get awards for my poetry.

A_Perfect_Sonnet · 01-11-2006, 11:39 AM

Poetry.com must love you.

creepinson · 01-11-2006, 03:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ma Cherie

trust me i get awards for my poetry.

trust me, i dont know whether to laugh or cry

Ma Cherie · 01-19-2006, 11:52 AM

well i don't just winn them on the internet, i win them at school, and in competitions in state.

creepinson · 01-19-2006, 04:31 PM

that was pretty much implied... and the fact that you got an A on your haiku in grade 7 doesnt always translate into a life time of poetic excellence

Crowe · 01-19-2006, 06:30 PM

I am all about giving a person the benefit of the doubt, but Ma Cherie... when you come into a place looking down your nose at people, you aren't going to get a red carpet welcome. If someone asks you what a word means, they are trying to learn so they can read your lyrics/poetry. Calling them ignorant because they didn't have a thesaurus or dictionary handy is ignorant in itself.

It is also obvious that you use a thesaurus because you do not use some of the words correctly- and since a thesaurus doesn't have situational sentence structures you aren't able to look up how they are used.

While you may or may not have won these "poetry competitions" - that doesn't make you a better writer than anyone based on that fact alone. Not everyone in the world enters their writing into competitions. Furthermore, why should we believe that you have won these "competitions" - you can barely use the words correctly, let alone spell them correctly.

Sorry, Ma Cherie, you've just lost the respect of the people you call upon to critique your work. Try a different approach next time, eh gov?

creepinson · 01-19-2006, 08:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowe

I am all about giving a person the benefit of the doubt, but Ma Cherie... when you come into a place looking down your nose at people, you aren't going to get a red carpet welcome. If someone asks you what a word means, they are trying to learn so they can read your lyrics/poetry. Calling them ignorant because they didn't have a thesaurus or dictionary handy is ignorant in itself.

It is also obvious that you use a thesaurus because you do not use some of the words correctly- and since a thesaurus doesn't have situational sentence structures you aren't able to look up how they are used.

While you may or may not have won these "poetry competitions" - that doesn't make you a better writer than anyone based on that fact alone. Not everyone in the world enters their writing into competitions. Furthermore, why should we believe that you have won these "competitions" - you can barely use the words correctly, let alone spell them correctly.

Sorry, Ma Cherie, you've just lost the respect of the people you call upon to critique your work. Try a different approach next time, eh gov?

you make my snide remark seem so much less snide

eh gov? genius... just genius

Crowe · 01-20-2006, 08:27 AM

hah! ON the contrary creep! Your remark is like a punch to the solar plexus and leaves the victim struggling for air. Mine is like a slow moving poison that takes the person down slowly and then delivers the final message. Both are efficient, but yours is so much more spectacular to watch!

Did anyone else notice we have the most queer selection of smilies known to man?

Ma Cherie · 01-20-2006, 10:14 AM

tecnically, you vindictive anger have no effect, i do not get just As on haiku, i have pleanty of other things, and no i'm not looking down at misfits, he just always rude to me so i gave him some back, and wether or not i use thesaurus or a diction ary has no meaning to what i write, it is about what flows, and forms for the nothingness of the words where thet ten thousands things flow together.

not looking down my nose it the 5th song i have posted., the others were deleted when i left the second time.
i'm not snobbish it just that i get angered when people get offened by the darkness of what i write.
i never want to write a happy ending to a song because it defeats my purpose of writeing in the first place to get the anger, hate rage, saddness, and pain out of my system in order to funtion proficiently

01-11-2006, 11:30 AM	#12 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	either way, i put them because in other forums use of word people don't under stand(yes there are those ignorant enougth to ask what they mean) fussed because they did not know, and in poetry all word are fair game to be used how ever you wish to use them, so long as the flow is not disturbed. trust me i get awards for my poetry. __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

01-19-2006, 11:52 AM	#15 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	well i don't just winn them on the internet, i win them at school, and in competitions in state. __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

01-19-2006, 06:30 PM	#17 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	I am all about giving a person the benefit of the doubt, but Ma Cherie... when you come into a place looking down your nose at people, you aren't going to get a red carpet welcome. If someone asks you what a word means, they are trying to learn so they can read your lyrics/poetry. Calling them ignorant because they didn't have a thesaurus or dictionary handy is ignorant in itself. It is also obvious that you use a thesaurus because you do not use some of the words correctly- and since a thesaurus doesn't have situational sentence structures you aren't able to look up how they are used. While you may or may not have won these "poetry competitions" - that doesn't make you a better writer than anyone based on that fact alone. Not everyone in the world enters their writing into competitions. Furthermore, why should we believe that you have won these "competitions" - you can barely use the words correctly, let alone spell them correctly. Sorry, Ma Cherie, you've just lost the respect of the people you call upon to critique your work. Try a different approach next time, eh gov? __________________

01-20-2006, 08:27 AM	#19 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	hah! ON the contrary creep! Your remark is like a punch to the solar plexus and leaves the victim struggling for air. Mine is like a slow moving poison that takes the person down slowly and then delivers the final message. Both are efficient, but yours is so much more spectacular to watch! Did anyone else notice we have the most queer selection of smilies known to man? __________________

01-20-2006, 10:14 AM	#20 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	tecnically, you vindictive anger have no effect, i do not get just As on haiku, i have pleanty of other things, and no i'm not looking down at misfits, he just always rude to me so i gave him some back, and wether or not i use thesaurus or a diction ary has no meaning to what i write, it is about what flows, and forms for the nothingness of the words where thet ten thousands things flow together. not looking down my nose it the 5th song i have posted., the others were deleted when i left the second time. i'm not snobbish it just that i get angered when people get offened by the darkness of what i write. i never want to write a happy ending to a song because it defeats my purpose of writeing in the first place to get the anger, hate rage, saddness, and pain out of my system in order to funtion proficiently __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

01-10-2006, 05:31 PM	#11 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	gabbahey there we go... lol i got banned till thursday or something

01-11-2006, 11:39 AM	#13 (permalink)
A_Perfect_Sonnet Dinosaurus Rex!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Winchester, VA Posts: 896	Poetry.com must love you.

01-19-2006, 04:31 PM	#16 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	that was pretty much implied... and the fact that you got an A on your haiku in grade 7 doesnt always translate into a life time of poetic excellence