yes, edge...?

then your lyrics would still be contrived, forced, cliche, and repetitive. we just wouldn't know why.

Why would you think?

I'd probably think you had a mental handicap of some sort. Then I wouldn't have made fun of you as much.

I hate being vulnerable...and that makes me more vulnerable. So I feel the need to prove myself...why can't you let me just have that?

MadeInNY, clear you message box i'm trying to send you something.

Ok I just did it, Alejo.

you're not vulnerable, You're just not an adult yet. there's nothing wrong with that. for god's sake just enjoy being a kid while you still can. It's awesome that you like writing songs. keep up with it because it's obviously a great outlet for you. You just asked us to give our honest opinion, and we did. There's a reason that artists who start out when they're really young only have audiences of young kids. It's because their songs and lyrics dont appeal to adult crowds who want something more out of the lyrics.

Thats the thing...I don't like being a kid. Kids get looked down on and thought of of less knowledgeable and idiotic. Thats not me...or maybe it is and I'm in denial.....

This thread should be deleted, Its nothing but spam and a crappy song

and MadeinNY i may not no u but u cant have it that hard compared to other ppl.