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Old 01-09-2006, 07:00 PM   #11 (permalink)
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They're not insignificant to me...why doesn't anyone understand that?

The reason they may seem insignificant to you is because the song is meant to say, lets go back to simple times before all this **** happen in both our lives to screw everything up.
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Old 01-09-2006, 07:02 PM   #12 (permalink)
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No one has lived your life, so it doesn't do a very good job at capturing anyone else. You don't relate it to anything that can give anyone reading this a clear connection to how you feel or how they should feel about the situations. They are vague and sporadic.
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Old 01-09-2006, 07:03 PM   #13 (permalink)
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dude your twelve... stick with people that arent more than double your age... and in any case, if you have to argue that she looks good for her age... its probably nasty no matter how much you argue...

P.S. dont post funny songs, unless you're sure your gonna get some laughs, be serious about your writing...

P.S.S. i just realized how many posts youve got in such a short ammount of time... thats almost 500 a month man... thats like more than 15 a day... i dont know whether to congradulate you or make you rethink your life
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Old 01-09-2006, 07:05 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Rethink my life? LMFAO ROFL!!!!!!!! HAHAH! OVER THE INTERNET? LMFAO ROFL!! Thank you for making me laugh!!!! HAHAHHA I havent laughed in days, no seriously, thank you!!!!!!!!! ROFL!!!!!!!!


Oh ethan, Im just trying to make them see my POV of the song so they see and can give me feedback on how to incorporate that into the song.
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Old 01-09-2006, 07:11 PM   #15 (permalink)
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madeinNY your 12, not to many people take you seriously and the fact you have a horrid mouth at your age doesn't help you either. Im gonna stop here and just tell you to drop it because you can and will get torn apart if you try and continue this.
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Old 01-09-2006, 07:12 PM   #16 (permalink)
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ahaha yeah... i thought someone with tragedies that had been tearing them to shreads during their pre adolescence could use a pick me up
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Old 01-09-2006, 07:16 PM   #17 (permalink)
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it's really tough to judge, because, like other people have said, you're 12. Seriously, i know you think you're really grown up now, but a few years down the road, you'll look back at yourself as you are now and think "wow, i can't believe I thought I was so mature....i was such a little kid...." then years after THAT, you'll look back and think, "wow, i can't believe I thought i was grown up...". What's more, you'll look back on your childhood and wish you hadnt wasted it by trying to grow up too fast. Trust me, when you get to be an adult, you'll have more than enough problems and you'll wish your life could be as simple as it was when you were the age you are now. Slow down, enjoy childhood while it lasts, because even though it sounds really cheesy, it does go by WAY too fast to waste time worrying about stuff you dont need to.
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Old 01-09-2006, 07:21 PM   #18 (permalink)
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I think i need to worry about one of my best friends being anorexic and possibly dying..but thank you for putting it nicely.

I cant help that I have a foul mouth, Ethan.

Spend 10 minuets with me in the real world, everyone, you'll know Im for real.
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Haha


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I think i need to worry about one of my best friends being anorexic and possibly dying..but thank you for putting it nicely.

I cant help that I have a foul mouth, Ethan.

Spend 10 minuets with me in the real world, everyone, you'll know Im for real.
look, no one is saying that you haven't had trials in your life, because EVERYONE has something to deal with. I just noticed that in a lot of your other songs, you talk about being in love with someone, having failed relationships, things like that. Word of advice, at your age, it's impossible to truly love someone in a romantic sense, and any relationship you have isnt a real relationship at that young an age. Don't waste your energy worrying about stuff like that, because like I said, soon enough, your life will get way more complicated, and you'll look back and wish you hadn't spent what should have been the most carefree years of your life worrying about "relationships" and things like that.
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