The Ballad of Hating You

Crazy Luv · 01-09-2006, 02:38 PM

hmmm, maybe it wont work *lol*

or, maybe

The inevitable is unavoidale
So don't save me from your fears
I can cry my own feigned tears

...or something

madeinNY · 01-09-2006, 02:47 PM

^oo I like that ;] fankoo!

A_Perfect_Sonnet · 01-09-2006, 05:05 PM

This is horrid. You have the vocabulary and subtlety of a second-grader. The approach to this song was awful, with forced rhymes that don't advance plot or thought. I don't usually call things cliched, but everything in here is either done to the point of making me want to shoot myself in the head and post the bulletin on myspace, or so stupid that I want to shoot myself in the head and post the bulletin on myspace.

PS. Not a ballad.

creepinson · 01-09-2006, 05:24 PM

holy crap APS is on here too?!?! about time... all this stuff is nothing compared to MX

madeinNY · 01-09-2006, 06:42 PM

APS, I don't exactly call what you said helpful critism.

No, its not a balad, its just the title of the song.

sleepy jack · 01-09-2006, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by madeinNY

APS, I don't exactly call what you said helpful critism.

No, its not a balad, its just the title of the song.

Pointing out flaws is extremely helpful and if the song sucks, it needs to be said it sucks.

madeinNY · 01-09-2006, 06:51 PM

Why must you always make me look a fool, Ethan? I can do it on my own thank you, I don't need your help.

That being said, I re-read his post and your right.

yes this will eventually end up quoted.

01-09-2006, 02:47 PM	#12 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	^oo I like that ;] fankoo! __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-09-2006, 06:42 PM	#15 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	APS, I don't exactly call what you said helpful critism. No, its not a balad, its just the title of the song. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-09-2006, 06:51 PM	#17 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Why must you always make me look a fool, Ethan? I can do it on my own thank you, I don't need your help. That being said, I re-read his post and your right. yes this will eventually end up quoted. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-09-2006, 02:38 PM	#11 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	hmmm, maybe it wont work lol or, maybe The inevitable is unavoidale So don't save me from your fears I can cry my own feigned tears ...or something

01-09-2006, 05:05 PM	#13 (permalink)
A_Perfect_Sonnet Dinosaurus Rex!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Winchester, VA Posts: 896	This is horrid. You have the vocabulary and subtlety of a second-grader. The approach to this song was awful, with forced rhymes that don't advance plot or thought. I don't usually call things cliched, but everything in here is either done to the point of making me want to shoot myself in the head and post the bulletin on myspace, or so stupid that I want to shoot myself in the head and post the bulletin on myspace. PS. Not a ballad.

01-09-2006, 05:24 PM	#14 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	holy crap APS is on here too?!?! about time... all this stuff is nothing compared to MX