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Old 01-06-2006, 02:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by End Of the Innocence


Chorus
Emo Queen
You rule your world
Like a bee
Over a hoard
Cutting wrists
Ending life
Making fists
Creating striffe

Creepy scars all up your arms
Make us forget with all your charms

Stealing razors to let you cut
It must take a lot of gut

Your heart of pain
Makes you insane

Chorus

Violins play all around
But you can not make a sound

so yeah it's like a teenager's but what i'd change are the following:
"creating striffe" should be replaced
you should change "creppy" with "pretty" cause it's like cooler
and "makes" with "drives"
and the violins part should go..... away
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