my song (band)

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 02:13 PM

aw...well maybe you can buy one...

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 02:15 PM

yea thats a good idea.. want to send me the money for that ahhaha.. me being poor doesn't help my non musical carrer take off haha

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 02:16 PM

ohhhh lol..well do you know anyone who has a guitar??

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 02:17 PM

i do.. but most of my friends can't play guitar so they fake they do and would never let me touch theres in fear that i would be better then them..

at least i know i can't play it.. but i try and i would rather make my own stuff other then just learning every other song by nirvana!! haha

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-06-2006, 05:36 PM

new song.. well to put in here that is.. but i wrote this along time ago too! so please rip it apart and enjoy!! haha

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Eviction of the Affection

The secrets of you and me lies beneath my feet
Deep within the ground
Spinning round and round

My kisses are cold
My arms they won’t hold…
LET GO!

I can’t do this
Don’t let …
Go…

(Course)
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of eviction I have
I will blame you

Oddly knowing there is no control
Whisper to you through the ground
Spinning round and round

(Course)
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of eviction I have
I will blame you
Cause I ****ing hate you...

Circle the hate around my soul
I will let you diminish away
Ha-ha! … Insane in the things I think
Imagination takes control
Ha-ha! … You think you made me whole

(Course)
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of eviction I have
I blame it on you
My heart stains you
My soul hates you
With every bit of affection I had
I still blame you
Cause I ****ing hate you…
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now begin to rip!

madeinNY · 01-06-2006, 09:04 PM

this is the best thing in this thread

but this: My heart stains you

and this: Whisper to you through the ground

don't make sense to me...and how are you going to fit the Ha ha's in?

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-06-2006, 09:20 PM

the hahas are a stop in the song.. where the music every thing stops then the drms slowly creep in and then laughs in the back round but only from one person.. and its just a simple haha.. and then kind creeps back into singing.. haha

i have a strange tool inspried song writing and singing style haha

madeinNY · 01-06-2006, 09:22 PM

haha sounds cool G'luck

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-06-2006, 09:42 PM

yea i'll need it haha.. tool inspried me write.. yet when i write some of stuff like the last few songs i'm sent you.. i can picture them beign like tool songs.. yet i can also picture them beign acoustic only songs haha.. know what i';m saying?

madeinNY · 01-06-2006, 09:43 PM

yea, i get it

what is tool??

01-03-2006, 02:13 PM	#61 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	aw...well maybe you can buy one... __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 02:16 PM	#63 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	ohhhh lol..well do you know anyone who has a guitar?? __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-06-2006, 09:04 PM	#66 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	this is the best thing in this thread but this: My heart stains you and this: Whisper to you through the ground don't make sense to me...and how are you going to fit the Ha ha's in? __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-06-2006, 09:22 PM	#68 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	haha sounds cool G'luck __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-06-2006, 09:43 PM	#70 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	yea, i get it what is tool?? __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 02:15 PM	#62 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	yea thats a good idea.. want to send me the money for that ahhaha.. me being poor doesn't help my non musical carrer take off haha

01-03-2006, 02:17 PM	#64 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	i do.. but most of my friends can't play guitar so they fake they do and would never let me touch theres in fear that i would be better then them.. at least i know i can't play it.. but i try and i would rather make my own stuff other then just learning every other song by nirvana!! haha

01-06-2006, 05:36 PM	#65 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	new song.. well to put in here that is.. but i wrote this along time ago too! so please rip it apart and enjoy!! haha ------------------------------------------- Eviction of the Affection The secrets of you and me lies beneath my feet Deep within the ground Spinning round and round My kisses are cold My arms they won’t hold… LET GO! I can’t do this Don’t let … Go… (Course) My heart stains you My soul hates you With every bit of eviction I have I will blame you Oddly knowing there is no control Whisper to you through the ground Spinning round and round (Course) My heart stains you My soul hates you With every bit of eviction I have I will blame you Cause I **ing hate you... Circle the hate around my soul I will let you diminish away Ha-ha! … Insane in the things I think Imagination takes control Ha-ha! … You think you made me whole (Course) My heart stains you My soul hates you With every bit of eviction I have I blame it on you My heart stains you My soul hates you With every bit of affection I had I still blame you Cause I **ing hate you… ------------------------------------------- now begin to rip!

01-06-2006, 09:20 PM	#67 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	the hahas are a stop in the song.. where the music every thing stops then the drms slowly creep in and then laughs in the back round but only from one person.. and its just a simple haha.. and then kind creeps back into singing.. haha i have a strange tool inspried song writing and singing style haha

01-06-2006, 09:42 PM	#69 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	yea i'll need it haha.. tool inspried me write.. yet when i write some of stuff like the last few songs i'm sent you.. i can picture them beign like tool songs.. yet i can also picture them beign acoustic only songs haha.. know what i';m saying?