my song (Nirvana, Tool, Kiss, songs, guitar)

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 01:45 PM

breaking lines to enter your heart....didn't get that part....

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 01:51 PM

such as
you know how you can cross a line between friends and lovers.. well thats it.. :o)

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 01:52 PM

aha...well then, there is nothing i would change

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 01:58 PM

:o) woooooooooooooooooooooooo! makes me smile

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 02:00 PM

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 02:02 PM

Comfort in Empties Arm’s

Falling to my feet…… again
Drown you in my empty soul
Taken mindless pleasure in… this

Games you’ve played
Lies you’ve said

I’m a moron because of ……. You
Thought I should try to trust in….. You

Carry out my other victims
Break my body…. Down
Kill the eyes that steal…. Your soul

**** you... I’ve got my life to lose

I am just an insane creation of……. Everything that’s ill
Trust into the saneness of your lies
Carry you into the sweetest dreams

Break you down….
Here’s the…….
MISERY!

Bringing you down…. So far down
Bring you down… so far down
Bringing you down… so far down
Bring you so far down…

i'm not sure if i put that song there yet or not.. just cope with me here tho..
in this song if i coudl ver in fact put music behind it some day this is what it would be like ...

where theres a line.. and then alot dots like this are there ............ in between whatever and another word its a stop then the word puts in then dragging it into the line under it.. get it.. haha hmmm! i';m confuseing anyways.. and thats what the song would be like.. and there is no real course in the song still the end..

Break you down….
Here’s the…….
MISERY!

Bringing you down…. So far down
Bring you down… so far down
Bringing you down… so far down
Bring you so far down…

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that part i guess would be course like.. but in between the two couruse parts i would have just instruments and it would rock!!!

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 02:05 PM

It sounds like a revenge song, which is kind of cliche....but there's originality in the way you would things...it's a little confusing, but if you decipher a little it's quite good.

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 02:08 PM

yea i wrote that song last night i think.. or the night before either way.. i like it.... i just wish i coudl make it real some how haha!

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 02:08 PM

Well wait, you play guitar, right?

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 02:12 PM

no i used to.. but i don't have one any more!! :o(

01-03-2006, 01:45 PM	#51 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	breaking lines to enter your heart....didn't get that part.... __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 01:52 PM	#53 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	aha...well then, there is nothing i would change __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 02:00 PM	#55 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	__________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 02:05 PM	#57 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	It sounds like a revenge song, which is kind of cliche....but there's originality in the way you would things...it's a little confusing, but if you decipher a little it's quite good. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 02:08 PM	#59 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Well wait, you play guitar, right? __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 01:51 PM	#52 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	such as you know how you can cross a line between friends and lovers.. well thats it.. :o)

01-03-2006, 01:58 PM	#54 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	:o) woooooooooooooooooooooooo! makes me smile

01-03-2006, 02:02 PM	#56 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	Comfort in Empties Arm’s Falling to my feet…… again Drown you in my empty soul Taken mindless pleasure in… this Games you’ve played Lies you’ve said I’m a moron because of ……. You Thought I should try to trust in….. You Carry out my other victims Break my body…. Down Kill the eyes that steal…. Your soul **** you... I’ve got my life to lose I am just an insane creation of……. Everything that’s ill Trust into the saneness of your lies Carry you into the sweetest dreams Break you down…. Here’s the……. MISERY! Bringing you down…. So far down Bring you down… so far down Bringing you down… so far down Bring you so far down… i'm not sure if i put that song there yet or not.. just cope with me here tho.. in this song if i coudl ver in fact put music behind it some day this is what it would be like ... where theres a line.. and then alot dots like this are there ............ in between whatever and another word its a stop then the word puts in then dragging it into the line under it.. get it.. haha hmmm! i';m confuseing anyways.. and thats what the song would be like.. and there is no real course in the song still the end.. Break you down…. Here’s the……. MISERY! Bringing you down…. So far down Bring you down… so far down Bringing you down… so far down Bring you so far down… -------------- that part i guess would be course like.. but in between the two couruse parts i would have just instruments and it would rock!!!

01-03-2006, 02:08 PM	#58 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	yea i wrote that song last night i think.. or the night before either way.. i like it.... i just wish i coudl make it real some how haha!

01-03-2006, 02:12 PM	#60 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	no i used to.. but i don't have one any more!! :o(