my song (rock, guitar, Hang)

Crazy Luv · 01-03-2006, 10:16 AM

the link ya gave me...ring a bell?

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 10:22 AM

oh ya!!!! :o)

sorry

but ya i;m going back to being 32 now haha :o)

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 12:51 PM

this conversation is weird, haha.

written anything else, Sabrina?

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 12:52 PM

yea a few things i'll going to look in my "song writting book" and i'll see if i find something worth being picked apart to put in here ;p

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 12:53 PM

ok cool, i look forward to it.

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 01:19 PM

hahah here we go!!!

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soon you won't be able to breath
i'll sufforcate you with all my needs
holding on to you like a heart disease
fighting my eevry emotional need

can't bretah
falling on my knees
hold me!
holde me please!!

you can't see the things in me
the things you can't open your eyes to see
something you won't believe
please!
open your eyes to me

damaged heart lay down for rest
try to taste this happiness
breaking lines to enter your heart
falling apart, holdin on.. i'll past the test

can't breath
falling on my knees
hold me!
hold me please!!

damaged heart won't you stay
hold on to me
hold me closem don't break away

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thoughts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 01:23 PM

This one is actually very good...

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 01:28 PM

really.. thank you!!! got a favorite part??

madeinNY · 01-03-2006, 01:31 PM

the can't breathe, fallin on my knees part

~~Sabgoat~~ · 01-03-2006, 01:39 PM

so theres nothing you think shoudl be added taken away??? nothing??/

01-03-2006, 12:51 PM	#43 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	this conversation is weird, haha. written anything else, Sabrina? __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 12:53 PM	#45 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	ok cool, i look forward to it. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 01:23 PM	#47 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	This one is actually very good... __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 01:31 PM	#49 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	the can't breathe, fallin on my knees part __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-03-2006, 10:16 AM	#41 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	the link ya gave me...ring a bell?

01-03-2006, 10:22 AM	#42 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	oh ya!!!! :o) sorry but ya i;m going back to being 32 now haha :o)

01-03-2006, 12:52 PM	#44 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	yea a few things i'll going to look in my "song writting book" and i'll see if i find something worth being picked apart to put in here ;p

01-03-2006, 01:19 PM	#46 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	hahah here we go!!! ----------------------------------- soon you won't be able to breath i'll sufforcate you with all my needs holding on to you like a heart disease fighting my eevry emotional need can't bretah falling on my knees hold me! holde me please!! you can't see the things in me the things you can't open your eyes to see something you won't believe please! open your eyes to me damaged heart lay down for rest try to taste this happiness breaking lines to enter your heart falling apart, holdin on.. i'll past the test can't breath falling on my knees hold me! hold me please!! damaged heart won't you stay hold on to me hold me closem don't break away -------------------------------------------- thoughts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

01-03-2006, 01:28 PM	#48 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	really.. thank you!!! got a favorite part??

01-03-2006, 01:39 PM	#50 (permalink)
~~Sabgoat~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 303	so theres nothing you think shoudl be added taken away??? nothing??/