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Old 01-29-2007, 12:22 AM   #261 (permalink)
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I opened this excepting a tale of rape, incest and what not. Just 'cause youre writing is great like that.

Its good, especially the last bit.
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Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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Old 01-29-2007, 05:01 PM   #262 (permalink)
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My favorite part is the half way mark its nasty though but its cool1
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Old 02-06-2007, 12:50 AM   #263 (permalink)
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Default A Change For the Better

What it is.

A Change For the Better

Calm down your anger,
Brothers and sisters,
Stay with me by my side.
Something's changing,
And we're gonna be fine.
Keep your chin up,
Every boy and every girl,
Looking towards the future,
I see a new world.
I travel far now to look,
At our swelling land,
White chapels stand like,
Stone castles, and,
People like grains of sand.

Look out or the change,
Will take you by surprise,
I know you want to see the change,
With your own furious eyes.

We've been done wrong,
For far too long,
But the end is near for us,
To be delivered from the,
Ugly hands that serve us.
Oh bye, bye, we'e finally,
Smiling, good bye, our eyes,
Are finally shining, and the future,
Is no longer a struggle,
And this change will sweep,
Away the debris that,
Collected by your decree.
Boarded up homes are modern ruins,
And their owners; crumbling gods.

Look out or the change,
Will take you by surprise,
I know you want to see the change,
With your own furious eyes.

Sam knew when he was born by the river,
Bob knew when he recognized the times,
And with the time, we change,
And with the time, we change,
Turn your eyes to the Capitol skies,
Yes, it's time for a change,
And we're all gonna change.
Yes we're all gonna change.

But for the better?
For the better?
Yes we're all gonna change,
And be better.

R. Crowe
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Old 02-06-2007, 03:40 AM   #264 (permalink)
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good description, i had images playing throughm my mind the whole time reading, i enjoyed it quite a bit
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Old 02-06-2007, 07:48 AM   #265 (permalink)
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Yeah I have to agree. I had lots of different imagery going through my mind while reading it. The flow was great throughout. Keep it up.

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Old 02-06-2007, 08:18 AM   #266 (permalink)
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Another great one crowe
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Old 02-06-2007, 03:18 PM   #267 (permalink)
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Every boy and every girl, < Bland much?
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Old 02-07-2007, 12:10 AM   #268 (permalink)
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Every boy and every girl, < Bland much?
Simplicity acquiesces to the clarity of the message. If I wanted my piece to be crowded with clumsy polysyllabic adjectives I'd have done it.

"I was born by the river in a little tent." That's a pretty bland line when it stands alone, but when you add the rest of the lyrics - you get one of the most beautiful songs ever written and recorded, "A Change is Gonna Come".

Complexity is not synonymous with greatness. Don't let yourself be fooled, PHAP.
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Old 02-08-2007, 03:47 AM   #269 (permalink)
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Default Through Love and Deaf

Love is always beautiful.

Through Love and Deaf


I love my wife dearly,
Though she can't hear what I say,
I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay.

I knew her before she knew me,
As I followed her down a street.
The darkness enveloped me,
I masked the sound of my feet.
She walked ahead bravely,
Not knowing, not seeming to care.
When I stepped on a bottle,
She didn't turn around in fright.
Because of this, I fell in love that night.
I called out to her to make sure,
That she could not hear my words.
I approached her tenderly,
And slipped my hand in hers.

I love my wife dearly,
Though she can't hear what I say,
I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay.

When we first were married,
And I'd come home late,
I'd crawl in bed behind her,
Whether she was asleep or awake,
I'd tell her what I'd done,
All the intricacies of my afflictions,
My passion is not a normal one,
Nothing as passive as art,
Yet I consider myself an artist,
Stopping another person's heart.
Whispering all the details,
Into the canals of her ear,
Knowing all the while, that she would never hear.

I love my wife dearly,
Though she can't hear what I say,
I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay.

One night I had come home,
My hands stained with red wine,
At least that's what I'd tell her,
If it caught her wandering eyes,
I crawled in bed behind her,
Rubbed my hand down her body,
And told her about the mess,
She responded with a sigh,
And I tried to get some sleep,
Tonight however was different,
I felt her body shift to me,
She leaned close to my ear,
"I love you too, my sweet."

I tell her all of my secrets,
Because I know secrets they will stay,
Because I know secrets they will stay.
I tell her all of my secrets,
And she loves me anyway.

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Old 02-08-2007, 04:18 AM   #270 (permalink)
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Jeeez, I like it.
I don't really get the husbands secret, this could be a problem with my state of mind though.
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