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Old 12-03-2006, 09:32 PM   #201 (permalink)
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Pretty flowers on her,
Dress, this young woman,
With a fake smile. She
Has forgotten the sound,
Of kindness and knows,
That a gentle touch is hard to find.
She waits, she's naive,
That stupid knight has,
Yet to arrive on golden steed.
Will he ride to find her and if so,
Will he know the way home?
i may have to change my sig now.

i loved it.
if we get married your vow better be half as good as this or our wedding night at happening for a lot of nights
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Old 12-03-2006, 09:40 PM   #202 (permalink)
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If my vow is better than this, our wedding night will last for 3 weeks.... without stop.
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Old 12-03-2006, 09:43 PM   #203 (permalink)
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Holy crap, random fact you always use to put R. Crowe for your songs, and for awhile I thought your first name was Russel.

Anyway, I like it but it isn't my favorite you've done.
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Old 12-03-2006, 09:49 PM   #204 (permalink)
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its great but maybe try to put a little stronger vocabulary in the first 2 lines.
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Old 12-03-2006, 09:59 PM   #205 (permalink)
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its great but maybe try to put a little stronger vocabulary in the first 2 lines.
Good idea. Let's see how we can touch that up...


A dismal little girl
Finds asylum in a hole.
Escaping the scary,
World on the outside.
Therein she cries
For a way home.
But what hand will
reach in and save her?
And how will they,
Know the way home?

hm?
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Old 12-03-2006, 10:04 PM   #206 (permalink)
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thats money right there
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Old 12-03-2006, 10:15 PM   #207 (permalink)
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Good idea. Let's see how we can touch that up...


A dismal little girl
Finds asylum in a hole.
Escaping the scary,
World on the outside.
Therein she cries
For a way home.
But what hand will
reach in and save her?
And how will they,
Know the way home?

hm?
wanna get married
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Old 12-03-2006, 10:17 PM   #208 (permalink)
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wanna get married
Raine? Speaking of getting married? I didnt realize Hell had frozen over.
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Old 12-04-2006, 09:59 PM   #209 (permalink)
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I wonder if Raine is that serious to get marry with Crowe... -__-

despite of that, I like the creation, sound dispersing and sorrowful ^^
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Old 12-05-2006, 12:53 AM   #210 (permalink)
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She waits, she's naive,
That stupid knight has,
Yet to arrive on golden steed.
Will he ride to find her and if so,
Will he know the way home?

that line sticks out for me for some reason. i guess it just seems less mature than the rest of the song, but other than that, i really like it. like you said it's not your usual style, but you've done a great job with it, i'd actually like to see some more from you in the same style.
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