Crowe's Songwriting Collection

right-track · 10-27-2006, 03:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowe

Why does this happen in my song thread! The world hates me!

Sounds like an emo song coming on...

Corpse removed and thread cleaned up.
Sorry about the mess.

Crowe · 11-13-2006, 02:41 AM

o hai. just realized that i only got one comment here... i've been noticing that a lot on this forum recently... i havent really been helping.. .where is everyone?

sleepy jack · 11-13-2006, 08:37 PM

They're obviously all too busy nominating stuff for the poll <.<

ZeppelinAir · 11-13-2006, 09:23 PM

damn that is well writen, what style of music would you put with it?

Trauma · 11-19-2006, 04:56 PM

Crowe my friend really liked your poem.
He says you're a sex god.

Crowe · 11-19-2006, 10:26 PM

A sex God? Well, that's good news I guess

Alo · 11-20-2006, 07:52 AM

^I also posted it somewhere. But the people were less positive. They wrote emo all over it, and hated it. Typical...

I like it though.

Crowe · 11-20-2006, 10:09 AM

they did? bastards!

what site alo? Im gonna go give em a piece of my mind

Crowe · 12-03-2006, 09:18 PM

Normally, I am very verbose in my songs, I write a lot - I like to play with the language in large amounts. I took a more direct approach this time I've also re-instated the convention of a chorus, something I am not a huge fan of doing, and still am not sure if I am. I'm feeling creative lately. So I hope you enjoy my little experimentation. And hopefully I will be posting more. The new boom in the songwriting forum is encouraging.

A Discouraging Phenomenon of Distance

A dismal little girl
Finds asylum in a hole.
Escaping the scary,
World on the outside.
Therein she cries
For a way home.
But what hand will
reach in and save her?
And how will they,
Know the way home?

And who will come for the lost?
And who will cry for the lost??
And who will forget the lost?

A man sits gutterside,
Watching the couples
And friends walk by.
His clothes are a mess,
and he has to confess,
That he longs for,
some company during,
Those lonely nights.
But who will come for him?
And how will she,
Know the way home?

And who will come for the lost?
And who will cry for the lost??
And who will forget the lost?

Pretty flowers on her,
Dress, this young woman,
With a fake smile. She
Has forgotten the sound,
Of kindness and knows,
That a gentle touch is hard to find.
She waits, she's naive,
That stupid knight has,
Yet to arrive on golden steed.
Will he ride to find her and if so,
Will he know the way home?

And who will come for the lost?
And who will cry for the lost??
And who will forget the lost?

These are just some,
Of the thoughts and,
Faces of the lost ones,
Who are disregarded and alone,
But not so lonesome,
As the lost are surrounded by,
Others who are lost and,
Everyone is just waiting,
To be found, To be fine.
So I'll find you, if you find me.
And then if we can do it.
We'll find a way home.

And we will come for the lost.
And we will dry the tears of the lost.
We will never forget the lost.

-Ryan Crowe

~~[MERIT]~~ · 12-03-2006, 09:26 PM

good job

11-13-2006, 02:41 AM	#192 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	o hai. just realized that i only got one comment here... i've been noticing that a lot on this forum recently... i havent really been helping.. .where is everyone? __________________

11-13-2006, 09:23 PM	#194 (permalink)
ZeppelinAir Long time no see Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 512	damn that is well writen, what style of music would you put with it? __________________ not that old signature

11-19-2006, 04:56 PM	#195 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	Crowe my friend really liked your poem. He says you're a sex god. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

11-19-2006, 10:26 PM	#196 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	A sex God? Well, that's good news I guess __________________

11-20-2006, 07:52 AM	#197 (permalink)
Alo Scarf Join Date: May 2006 Location: Brighton, UK Posts: 715	^I also posted it somewhere. But the people were less positive. They wrote emo all over it, and hated it. Typical... I like it though. __________________ I rocked my shoelaces untied

11-20-2006, 10:09 AM	#198 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	they did? bastards! what site alo? Im gonna go give em a piece of my mind __________________

12-03-2006, 09:18 PM	#199 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	A Discouraging Phenomenon of Distance Normally, I am very verbose in my songs, I write a lot - I like to play with the language in large amounts. I took a more direct approach this time I've also re-instated the convention of a chorus, something I am not a huge fan of doing, and still am not sure if I am. I'm feeling creative lately. So I hope you enjoy my little experimentation. And hopefully I will be posting more. The new boom in the songwriting forum is encouraging. A Discouraging Phenomenon of Distance A dismal little girl Finds asylum in a hole. Escaping the scary, World on the outside. Therein she cries For a way home. But what hand will reach in and save her? And how will they, Know the way home? And who will come for the lost? And who will cry for the lost?? And who will forget the lost? A man sits gutterside, Watching the couples And friends walk by. His clothes are a mess, and he has to confess, That he longs for, some company during, Those lonely nights. But who will come for him? And how will she, Know the way home? And who will come for the lost? And who will cry for the lost?? And who will forget the lost? Pretty flowers on her, Dress, this young woman, With a fake smile. She Has forgotten the sound, Of kindness and knows, That a gentle touch is hard to find. She waits, she's naive, That stupid knight has, Yet to arrive on golden steed. Will he ride to find her and if so, Will he know the way home? And who will come for the lost? And who will cry for the lost?? And who will forget the lost? These are just some, Of the thoughts and, Faces of the lost ones, Who are disregarded and alone, But not so lonesome, As the lost are surrounded by, Others who are lost and, Everyone is just waiting, To be found, To be fine. So I'll find you, if you find me. And then if we can do it. We'll find a way home. And we will come for the lost. And we will dry the tears of the lost. We will never forget the lost. -Ryan Crowe __________________ Last edited by Crowe; 12-03-2006 at 10:06 PM.

12-03-2006, 09:26 PM	#200 (permalink)
~~[MERIT]~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Missouri, USA Posts: 4,814	good job