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Old 08-16-2006, 12:18 PM   #141 (permalink)
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That's the same question I ask her every day. She did get my little brother out of it though, so it's a subject on which I have to tread lightly... can't offend her now, can we?
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Old 08-17-2006, 12:26 PM   #142 (permalink)
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- He took my 11 year old brother to see his own grave. No, not my stepdad's grave... he took him to my BROTHER'S GRAVE. And said to him, "This is where you will lay forever, right next to your grandparents and I." He already has a grave stone made up for him... he got it for a present when he was 9. My grandparents give me money.
Thats strange.. but lots of people do those things these days... there's nothing overly bad about that situation.
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- He told my 7 year old brother (the same brother, but he was 7 at the time) that my mother loved me more than she loved him(my brother). When my mother figured this out, naturally she went ape-****, why would you say that to a 7 year old child? When he was approached about this, his justification was, "I was sympathizing with him because you (my mother) grounded him from TV" - hmm, that sounds like a reasonable way to sympathize with a child... tell him that his mother doesn't love him.
my mom does love my step bother more.. he's 10..
and my mother also loves my older brother more.. and doesn't hide it.
so maybe your little brother was questioning or something.. and your step father wants your little brother to rely on him more.. trying to make sure he kid plays sides.
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- My brother talks like he is from the 50s because me ole stepdad lives out in a farm in Illinois with his parents. He has actually said to another child in an argument "Hey buster, why don't you come over here so I can make somethin' out of ya!" in a threatening tone. Threatening is used against my best judgement, but that's what it was supposed to be. This really isn't my ex stepdads fault or does it make him crazy... but it's weird to be sure.
your little brother will probably get beat up a lot..
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- He tells my brother that my mother will love her new husband more than she loves him. Sympathy indeed.
Whats wrong with that? its clear its true or she would still be with yur step dad.
and how many times has she been married?
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- He tells my brother to not get too close to my mom's new husband, because my mother can't love anyone for too long - I mean, that's why they got divorced, right?
do you think so?
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That and the fact that me ole step da' kicked my dog across the room or grabbed me by my throat from time to time and gave me a good ole walloping in general. That can't be the reason!
and he's a mean man.. and clearly didn't love you like a son.. and you mom should have seen that before she had married him. but thank god for you she left him.
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- Buys cows, and lets my brother raise them and he gives them names... like pets. Oh, not so bad... my brother raises them on the farm... pretty happy little image there. They sit down to dinner one night and he tells my brother, Isn't Brownie good? Brownie was one of my brother's pets.
my aunt does the same thing to her kids.. but with ducks.. only non of them care..said thing is they have these cute things from the time there born till they were like 5 years old.. really sad.. I did say something to her tho.. cause i think its really mean.
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- Told my brother that he had a surprise for him one day when he woke up. He brings my brother out to the porch and tells him to look under it... my brother sees his dog there... it's dead. My father then asks my brother, "Doesn't he look peaceful?"
dare zi even say it.. but your mom should clearly get full custody of your little brother.. if not he will be really ****ed up..
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- Cries to make my brother feel bad.
my dad does this all the time.. but it never works.

good luck with your brother, with your step father.. and the sanity of your mother.
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Old 08-17-2006, 12:55 PM   #143 (permalink)
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... strange
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Old 08-17-2006, 05:24 PM   #144 (permalink)
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Whats wrong with that? its clear its true or she would still be with yur step dad.
and how many times has she been married?
No, no, no... He told him that she would love her new husband more than she loved him (aka, my brother, not my ex step)
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Old 08-17-2006, 05:33 PM   #145 (permalink)
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Wow man, you should keep your brother away from him.
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Old 08-28-2006, 04:41 AM   #146 (permalink)
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Don't Cry For This Ending is a Tragedy

On the morning she decided to leave me,
Was the morning where she set me free.
And when she told me I couldn't stop laughing,
And clapping while I rolled around the bed.
I helped her pack her things and I whistled,
An Irish tune that I learned from TV,
And suddenly she stopped and stare at me.
I told her to hurry up, I had things to do,
Normally they would be with who else but you,
But since you insist, do not expect me to resist,
I've been waiting for this day, much like you.
She balled her fist and swung at me, and without,
A reaction she hit me right square in the jaw.
And does it trouble you that my first thought,
As my head hit the green grass of the lawn was,

Oh look at how nice the flowers are in bloom
Oh look at how nice the flowers are in bloom
Oh look at how nice the flowers are in bloom.

Nursing my wounds with a bottle of brew,
I held it close like I used to hold her and,
I drank it down like I used to enjoy her and,
Remember the moment when she punched me,
Hard and I hit the ground with a smile it seems,
That it was the culmination of everything bad,
And finally I'd be in luck for a little while.
She came back to beg forgiveness as soon,
As the thought entered my mind. She begged,
Me endlessly and on her knees I simply had to decline.
I asked her if she wanted a drink, and she asked me,
If I was serious and I pulled out a Ginger Ale.
And as I turned back to her to see her face,
I was met with something else, it was her fist.
And does it trouble you that my first thought,
As my head hit the carpet on the wooden floor was,

Wow these carpets look pretty good in my room
Wow these carpets look pretty good in my room
Wow these carpets look pretty good in my room

Now my jaws grew bigger like a superhero's,
And after she kicked me while I was down,
I heard her stomp and scream as she slammed my,
Door that connects to my kitchen and while,
I sat with my puffy face, I still had to smile yeah,
I smiled through the pain. I was finally free, good,
mercy me. I thought I was as good as gone.
Giving my life away so early, I knew that things,
Would move along and I waited so eagerly for,
The next few days to bring me a life to start anew.
And like a river time did flow, but it must of been backwards,
Because before I knew it she was back and on her knees,
Before me. She cried and screamed like you wouldn't believe.
If only I'd take her back she'd change. I finally agreed,
And she leaned over and kissed me and I sighed deep.
And does it trouble you that my first though,
As her lips hit the spot that she bruised was,

I hope this relationship is over soon.
I hope this relationship is over soon.
I hope this relationship is over soon.

But it never was.
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Old 08-28-2006, 04:10 PM   #147 (permalink)
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I really really liked it, it was greattt.
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Old 08-30-2006, 05:39 AM   #148 (permalink)
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hahah that was radical.
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Old 08-30-2006, 10:40 AM   #149 (permalink)
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Thanks guys :-D - thought I'd go for something with a humorous undertone. Haven't really done that at all... anyone else? I'll try to post more. I was telling Crow that I only post a song like .. once every month. I just wish it would liven up around here!
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Old 08-30-2006, 01:14 PM   #150 (permalink)
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I think that there are so few of us on here that we should try to pull some more MB'ers in here. I think we should come up with a list of songs that we think have made the most impact or would have the most impact on the other MB'ers. I bet if those collabs went through, we could actually have an MB short album demo or something. So how should we go about this?
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