Crowe's Songwriting Collection

Trauma · 08-04-2006, 02:58 AM

That's going to be a pretty dramatic chord progression if Crowe uses that, especially the chorus, the Bm is perfect, I can feel it in the words.

I loved the lyrics for that song, that part "She shot out her hand" was amazing.

Crowe · 08-04-2006, 05:09 PM

I'm going to try this out on me old guitar and see how it pans out. We probably have a different idea of rythm - but if you do end up making this, of course, I leave it up to you.

Ace · 08-04-2006, 08:37 PM

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I have to say though, the line "she smiled for all of us" has a soothing effect on me.
In a strange, sad, comforting kinda way. Like a consolation of some kind.

Ditto. If you record it, toss me a link for the finished product.

Reznorslave · 08-04-2006, 10:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Ace

Ditto. If you record it, toss me a link for the finished product.

Double Ditto!

Crowe · 08-11-2006, 03:35 AM

Lil bitty love song. Enjoy.

Mistaken for Absence, or the Reunion of Hearts

I am rusty, so here, let's begin.
My lungs are trippingly touchy,
And softer than a silken sin.
My lips are moving, but like a,
Silent film my words are lost in,
A flickering light behind you.
The piano will play you a tune.
And therein you must decide my,
ebb and flow like the tide it's,
the only way to tell you how I feel.

I am trusting dear, let's reach in,
To each other's chest where,
Simplicity is merely a few beats,
Off from the measure you hear when,
I speak to you when I'm sleeping.
My lips are moving, but like a,
Noisy room, my words are lost in,
That screaming man behind you.
Instead my heartbeat will play you a tune.
And therein you must decide why,
The quicker the beat is how, well,
the only way to tell you how I feel.

I am causing fear, don't give in,
To the light in my eyes that,
May cause alarm, so I ask that you,
Stare through them and see my,
Thoughts that sometimes escape my,
Lips that are moving, but like a,
Memory, my words are lost in,
That foggy world where we forget.
Instead my gaze will play you a tune.
And wherein you must decide why,
The water welling up my eyes is,
the only way to tell you how I feel.

And after this brief reminder,
We fall in love again.

Trauma · 08-11-2006, 12:03 PM

That was awesome.

The rhythm in that poem was so flowing, it rolled off the tongue and brought the actions together in such a stylish way.

Crowe · 08-11-2006, 12:05 PM

Thx

- I also enjoy the Ace Ventura reference in your Custom Title :P

Trauma · 08-11-2006, 12:07 PM

You're welcome
Lolz, that's why I love that Fall of Troy song, I always think of that crazy cross-dresser.

sleepy jack · 08-11-2006, 04:49 PM

Aww, I loved it like, its amazing.

explosions-in-my-pants · 08-11-2006, 04:57 PM

Crowe, that might be one of the most beautiful things i've ever read.. its perfect. GRAET WORK!

08-04-2006, 02:58 AM	#111 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	That's going to be a pretty dramatic chord progression if Crowe uses that, especially the chorus, the Bm is perfect, I can feel it in the words. I loved the lyrics for that song, that part "She shot out her hand" was amazing. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

08-04-2006, 05:09 PM	#112 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	I'm going to try this out on me old guitar and see how it pans out. We probably have a different idea of rythm - but if you do end up making this, of course, I leave it up to you. __________________

08-11-2006, 03:35 AM	#115 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	Mistaken for Absence or the Reunion of Hearts Lil bitty love song. Enjoy. Mistaken for Absence, or the Reunion of Hearts I am rusty, so here, let's begin. My lungs are trippingly touchy, And softer than a silken sin. My lips are moving, but like a, Silent film my words are lost in, A flickering light behind you. The piano will play you a tune. And therein you must decide my, ebb and flow like the tide it's, the only way to tell you how I feel. I am trusting dear, let's reach in, To each other's chest where, Simplicity is merely a few beats, Off from the measure you hear when, I speak to you when I'm sleeping. My lips are moving, but like a, Noisy room, my words are lost in, That screaming man behind you. Instead my heartbeat will play you a tune. And therein you must decide why, The quicker the beat is how, well, the only way to tell you how I feel. I am causing fear, don't give in, To the light in my eyes that, May cause alarm, so I ask that you, Stare through them and see my, Thoughts that sometimes escape my, Lips that are moving, but like a, Memory, my words are lost in, That foggy world where we forget. Instead my gaze will play you a tune. And wherein you must decide why, The water welling up my eyes is, the only way to tell you how I feel. And after this brief reminder, We fall in love again. __________________

08-11-2006, 12:03 PM	#116 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	That was awesome. The rhythm in that poem was so flowing, it rolled off the tongue and brought the actions together in such a stylish way. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

08-11-2006, 12:05 PM	#117 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	Thx - I also enjoy the Ace Ventura reference in your Custom Title :P __________________

08-11-2006, 12:07 PM	#118 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	You're welcome Lolz, that's why I love that Fall of Troy song, I always think of that crazy cross-dresser. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

08-11-2006, 04:57 PM	#120 (permalink)
explosions-in-my-pants angel of tragic days Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 924	Crowe, that might be one of the most beautiful things i've ever read.. its perfect. GRAET WORK!