This poem (shows, quote, songs, suicide)

this_guy · 12-29-2005, 01:59 PM

What do you think of this poems:

Blade

My back is against the wall
All I see is a blade in front of me
As it draws nearer a bit of my life fades away
But who is doing this
Why would they do this?
Where have I wronged this person?

It must be her
She who gave me insult
I could tell the hatred she had with every word
Had to say it was mutual
But I could tell
It wasn’t her

It must be him
He who attacked me
His hatred was shown by his actions
Actions of pain and fury
But I could tell
It wasn’t him

It must be them
They who did both
Outnumbering me and tormenting me
The cowardly acts they did
But I could tell
It wasn’t them

Who? Who can it be?
But I could see the hand
It was he who never wronged me or gave insult
He who used no hatred
I could tell
It was me.

12-29-2005, 01:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
this_guy Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: cumbernauld Posts: 97	This poem What do you think of this poems: Blade My back is against the wall All I see is a blade in front of me As it draws nearer a bit of my life fades away But who is doing this Why would they do this? Where have I wronged this person? It must be her She who gave me insult I could tell the hatred she had with every word Had to say it was mutual But I could tell It wasn’t her It must be him He who attacked me His hatred was shown by his actions Actions of pain and fury But I could tell It wasn’t him It must be them They who did both Outnumbering me and tormenting me The cowardly acts they did But I could tell It wasn’t them Who? Who can it be? But I could see the hand It was he who never wronged me or gave insult He who used no hatred I could tell It was me.