I try :D

But seriously...my eyes. My granpa see's better than I do.

awwww:laughing: <that expresses my reaction to what ya said

:D I'm glad someone around here appreciates my humorous effort.

Quit spamming and get back on topic christ.
and after going through the poems they're decent but the rhyming is a bit off sometimes.
It aint bad though.

rhyming is a bit off, its way off cause i wasnt even rhyming at all :rolleyes:

Poems tend to rhyme its usually what makes them good, and i didn't read the whole thread, i didn't see you say you didn't wanna make it rhyme.

Usually its the good poems that don't rhyme...IMHO.
My mom writes some kick ass poetry, she's won awards, none of her's rhymes.

lol. thats amazing. I hate you hobo, but thats good stuff.

yes some tend to. & rhyming to me, is not what makes them good.

okay, but where did you see me indicate that i wanted it to?

I think a poem needs rhyme and or flow to sound good and after reading these they had neither, and they weren't written flowerly.