The Wives (quote, songs, '99, hands)

madeinNY · 12-27-2005, 03:10 PM

A/N: This is unedited, so HELPFUL critism is warmly accepted.
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Your hands are like magnets attracted to glass bottles
And when you've been there and back
How can you not stop?

You must know,
it's killing her.
Killing all of us.

So much for 99 percent.
You seem to always fall within that rare 1.

I know she has a reason
But she has to understand,
one person doesn't represent
what the rest of us conclude.

This story's about different people.
It's not about us.
It's about them.
And what they do to us.

Who we are
and why they do what they do.

Your hands are like magnets attracted to glass bottles
And when you've been there and back
How can you not stop?

You blackout
You don't know what you do.
You've been there and back.
How can you not stop?

Most people never have taste
what we consume every day
from you guys,
who just don't stop.

The fact of the matter is
You'll be back in there within a year

It's a disease.
An obsession.
You can't stop,
can you?

It's your fate
Not ours.
We can't control it.

All we can do is have false hope
from when you tell us,
99 percent.

Well...so much for that.

Crazy Luv · 12-27-2005, 06:31 PM

i like this song, know why, because it seems like its one of those songs that can mean many different things to each individual who reads/hears it.

my favorite parts are.....

Quote:

So much for 99 percent.
You seem to always fall within that rare 1.

Quote:

I know she has a reason
But she has to understand,
one person doesn't represent
what the rest of us conclude.

Quote:

This story's about different people.
It's not about us.
It's about them.
And what they do to us.

madeinNY · 12-27-2005, 06:31 PM

thank you very much Crazy!

And yes, it is one of those songs.

TrampInaTux · 12-28-2005, 06:34 AM

Read the song-it's not meant to rhyme. It's good. Some nice lines in there, but unlike Crazy I don't like that '99 percent but you fall within that rare 1' line. I found that to be VERY cheesy. But apart from that, it was very good.

madeinNY · 12-28-2005, 07:41 AM

Thank you muchly hobo! I appreciate it.

12-27-2005, 03:10 PM	#1 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	The Wives A/N: This is unedited, so HELPFUL critism is warmly accepted. --- Your hands are like magnets attracted to glass bottles And when you've been there and back How can you not stop? You must know, it's killing her. Killing all of us. So much for 99 percent. You seem to always fall within that rare 1. I know she has a reason But she has to understand, one person doesn't represent what the rest of us conclude. This story's about different people. It's not about us. It's about them. And what they do to us. Who we are and why they do what they do. Your hands are like magnets attracted to glass bottles And when you've been there and back How can you not stop? You blackout You don't know what you do. You've been there and back. How can you not stop? Most people never have taste what we consume every day from you guys, who just don't stop. The fact of the matter is You'll be back in there within a year It's a disease. An obsession. You can't stop, can you? It's your fate Not ours. We can't control it. All we can do is have false hope from when you tell us, 99 percent. Well...so much for that. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-27-2005, 06:31 PM	#3 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	thank you very much Crazy! And yes, it is one of those songs. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-28-2005, 07:41 AM	#5 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	Thank you muchly hobo! I appreciate it. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

12-28-2005, 06:34 AM	#4 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,418	Read the song-it's not meant to rhyme. It's good. Some nice lines in there, but unlike Crazy I don't like that '99 percent but you fall within that rare 1' line. I found that to be VERY cheesy. But apart from that, it was very good.