administer the destruction (dance, metal, quote, band, song)

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe · 12-23-2005, 07:24 AM

You must be mistaken my dear
time is our victim this time
so lets dance in perfect lines
and maybe youll realize what you did to me
even the robots start to breathe
(chorus)
These wars we draw on the sidewalk
are only deversions from our emotions

If I dissapper before this stops
let all the lights on 14th street die.
The search for frequencies
for these radios is all in vain
We're too busy
living our material lives
to even write our own names
(chorus)
the taste of your anguish
is all We ever needed.
If the sun fails to rise
Ill paint the sky red
and sing you to sleep
everytime we need it
just like the movies

TrampInaTux · 12-23-2005, 07:58 AM

well I don't like it. There's no real rhyming scheme. Tell me-is this a song or a poem?

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe · 12-23-2005, 07:59 AM

well at the moment its a rough draft for a song so i guess you could consider it a poem
but Im going to write choruses and stuff for it.

TrampInaTux · 12-23-2005, 08:01 AM

I just wouldn't bother. I'm guessing it is about a Rise of the machines or something-that's a pretty pointless subject to base a song on. And while I'm talking to you, can I ask what your name is about-I've been wondering for some time.

TheNumber12LooksLikeMe · 12-23-2005, 08:03 AM

that wasn't really the theme
but if its really that bad Ill stop working on it

its a play on the badn The Number Twelve Looks Like You

TrampInaTux · 12-23-2005, 08:11 AM

Oh sorry for my ignorance but I haven't heard of the band. I was also mistaken by the song I just took it about the whole 'robots breath' thing that it started to resemble what I originally thought. It's not awful, I have just kind of missed the point. Carry on with it and post it when its done-maybe then I won't give you such a dumb reply

sleepy jack · 12-23-2005, 01:09 PM

hobojesus shut the f*ck up and quit bitching about every little thing in this forum seriously, all he was saying was it was based on a band and since you havn't heard this band you wouldn't know the writing style, most metalcore doesn't rhyme usually.

Anyway i like it quite a bit, i especially like the last part after the last chorus.

MURDER JUNKIE · 12-24-2005, 03:20 AM

The number 12 just looks like 12 to me. I guess I'm just drunk

TrampInaTux · 12-24-2005, 03:48 AM

^^haha

either/or · 12-24-2005, 04:29 AM

yeah **** hobojesus you pick alot of fights dont you. and all songs dont have to have some ****ing emo point to them. some songs are just songs because they sounds good. not every thing has to have some grand deep meaning. grow up.

12-23-2005, 07:24 AM	#1 (permalink)
TheNumber12LooksLikeMe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 55	administer the destruction You must be mistaken my dear time is our victim this time so lets dance in perfect lines and maybe youll realize what you did to me even the robots start to breathe (chorus) These wars we draw on the sidewalk are only deversions from our emotions If I dissapper before this stops let all the lights on 14th street die. The search for frequencies for these radios is all in vain We're too busy living our material lives to even write our own names (chorus) the taste of your anguish is all We ever needed. If the sun fails to rise Ill paint the sky red and sing you to sleep everytime we need it just like the movies

12-24-2005, 04:29 AM	#10 (permalink)
either/or Don't think twice Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: A basement on the hill Posts: 349	yeah ** hobojesus you pick alot of fights dont you. and all songs dont have to have some **ing emo point to them. some songs are just songs because they sounds good. not every thing has to have some grand deep meaning. grow up. __________________ Painstaking devotion and love Surrendered to self preservation From others who care for themselves A blindness that touches perfection But hurts just like anything else Isolation, isolation, isolation

12-23-2005, 07:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,412	well I don't like it. There's no real rhyming scheme. Tell me-is this a song or a poem?

12-23-2005, 07:59 AM	#3 (permalink)
TheNumber12LooksLikeMe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 55	well at the moment its a rough draft for a song so i guess you could consider it a poem but Im going to write choruses and stuff for it.

12-23-2005, 08:01 AM	#4 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,412	I just wouldn't bother. I'm guessing it is about a Rise of the machines or something-that's a pretty pointless subject to base a song on. And while I'm talking to you, can I ask what your name is about-I've been wondering for some time.

12-23-2005, 08:03 AM	#5 (permalink)
TheNumber12LooksLikeMe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 55	that wasn't really the theme but if its really that bad Ill stop working on it its a play on the badn The Number Twelve Looks Like You

12-23-2005, 08:11 AM	#6 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,412	Oh sorry for my ignorance but I haven't heard of the band. I was also mistaken by the song I just took it about the whole 'robots breath' thing that it started to resemble what I originally thought. It's not awful, I have just kind of missed the point. Carry on with it and post it when its done-maybe then I won't give you such a dumb reply

12-24-2005, 03:20 AM	#8 (permalink)
MURDER JUNKIE The Wetter The Better!! Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: SH1TTY London Ontario Canada Posts: 2,484	The number 12 just looks like 12 to me. I guess I'm just drunk

12-24-2005, 03:48 AM	#9 (permalink)
TrampInaTux that's my war face. Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,412	^^haha