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Old 12-23-2005, 02:08 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Post Submitted for constructive critism

SHAPES AND BLURRED VISIONS

We wander the earth
constantly assuring ourselves
of who we think we are
not knowing how we got here
but that's just the story so far...

I look into the mirror
staring at the face before me
not knowing these unfamiliar features
seeing shapes and blurred visions
reminiscing of the past
and a feeling for the future...

Sometimes I forget where I am
what the hell are we doing!?
where are we going?
why are we so superficial?
I feel like screaming!
may the farce be with you
because I don't want it...

We consume all we see
some of us just fall from grace
we look into the crowds of all the people
seeing shapes and blurred visions...

We forget who we are
and where we came from
but that's just the story so far...
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