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Old 12-13-2005, 09:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default comments on lyrics please

friday nights are cold:and im sick of it
teenage heartthrob whore:and im tired
no one feels the way i do:cause were all normal
thats not what she said.

youd be better off dead in my book
youd be better off dead in my book

CHORUS:
but red hair shines tonight in school halls running
finding a place to hide
and im just avoding your face
in time, he'll pass by

and by then youll be on to someone new
not meaning to hurt but thats all that we've seen you do
and hes just another knotch in your rhyme stone belt
hes just another teenage heartache

VERSE:
and ill take in the way that you flirt everyday with the words that you say
you were far to cute

but crazy little girls only get so far


youd be better off dead in my book
youd be better off dead in my book


CHORUS:



guitar break:



OUTRO":
so why dont you do?
go dig your own grave: dont think that i havnt noticed your mistakes
so why cant you cry: ill make you wish that you stayed home that night
in the back of the shcool: where you stood like a fool that you are
i would never dare to dream back that far
thats far.





















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