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Old 12-10-2005, 09:56 PM   #21 (permalink)
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What can I say....
we think so similarly
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Old 12-10-2005, 09:57 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by bungalowbill357
I woke up the other day and cried
I was sad because because my girlfriend died
So I cut my wrists through the vein
My life is so hard that I cant feel pain

xxI slit my wrists for you xx
xx I sat and Cried for you xx
xxI died my hair black to be cool xx
xxI wish i could see you xx

My life is an abyss of pain
Falling through a spiral of razorblade game
Someone murder me cause I dont wanna wake up again
Bye bye my life love lost
For you I pay the bloody cost

xxI cut my wrists for you xx
xx I took my life for you xx
xx My broken tears are silent on your back xx
I would fuck you If i was a necropheliac


BEAT THAT BITCH
you Pwned his ass lol.......Ethan you did good too lol
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Old 12-10-2005, 09:57 PM   #23 (permalink)
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What can I say....
we think so similarly
Yes.
Your like my e-twin or something.

EDIT: learn to write REAL lyrics that are good not that whiny pop crap.

example:

Dear, just one day, just another fight
just one more lonely night
Just one more crowd under the burning lights
with some blood and mind to be paid
To my friends to my family
I tried to be the best man I could ever be
I tasted their failure on the entrance way
with some blood and mind to be paid
To my greatest of demons, I beat you
I beat you

and that is what we call kick ass
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Ive seen you on muiltipul forums saying Metallica and slayer are the worst **** you kid go suck your **** while you listen to your ****ing emo **** I bet you do listen to emo music
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Old 12-11-2005, 01:09 PM   #24 (permalink)
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My eyes bled the tears of a blackened heart,
A broken promise still hangs from my mirror.
The note reads "I love you. Signed Liar."
A burning question sets the words on fire.

Snap, you're all owned. My lyrics are scene to the max.
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Old 12-11-2005, 03:11 PM   #25 (permalink)
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That was so ..::x[.hxc.scenesta.cutyerwrists.]x::..
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Old 12-11-2005, 03:15 PM   #26 (permalink)
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would it be inappropriate to post the myspace suicide note here? they're almost as bad as x-ditorted-i'm-a-****ing-retard-x's lyrics
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Old 12-11-2005, 03:16 PM   #27 (permalink)
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i say go right ahead....haha..
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know.
Why do I start what I can't finish?
Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers.
My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it.
But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore..
maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers....

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Old 12-11-2005, 03:21 PM   #28 (permalink)
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PLEASE TELL THE COPS TO COME!!!!!!
and unbreak my heart, thats thrown against the wall!
cause you stood there and stabbed and ripped.
stab rip gun stab heart bullet stab blood dying rip massacre stabheartripgun
PLEASE TELL THE COPS TO COME!!!!!
and unsay these lies, cause i love you! I'm SO SORRY!!!!11!!1LOVE!!!11!
GUNRIPSTABHEARTDANCEDANCERIPHEART



i am going straight to hell
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Old 12-11-2005, 03:22 PM   #29 (permalink)
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Oh.
My.
Fucking.
God.
I now worship thou.
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Old 12-11-2005, 03:26 PM   #30 (permalink)
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http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5...ulletin7ki.gif

PLEASE TELL THE COPS TO COME!!!!!!
and unbreak my heart, thats thrown against the wall!
cause you stood there and stabbed and ripped.
stab rip gun stab heart bullet stab blood dying rip massacre stabheartripgun
PLEASE TELL THE COPS TO COME!!!!!
and unsay these lies, cause i love you! I'm SO SORRY!!!!11!!1LOVE!!!11!
GUNRIPSTABHEARTDANCEDANCERIPHEART



i am going straight to hell
worth it though wasnt it?
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How'd I end up here to begin with? I don't know.
Why do I start what I can't finish?
Oh please, don't barrage me with questions to all those ugly answers.
My ego's like my stomach- it keeps shitting what I feed it.
But maybe I don't want to finish anything anymore..
maybe I can wait in bed 'til she comes home. and whispers....

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shooting Star
Remember kids: It's only real metal if the vocalist sounds like he's vomiting up a fetus. \m/
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