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11-30-2005, 03:13 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Inkster,Mi
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Closed subjet.
Everyday it seems people are battered confused/
Stuck in they veiws it's not enough that they lose/ Society rioting hidin the truth of they dues...../ All this commercail sucess niggas get it confused/ Givin away balls & words for a new pair of shoes/ Who cares is it you? can you stare at the truth?/ So many muthafu.kas stay alive just to die..../ Survive just to lie almost die to try and get by/ Sacrificein the the truths for bentlys and coupes/ A house with many rooms and a way bigger roof/ Still remain gettin played media has no shame/ Lost of privicy feedin us through a frame...../ Knockin n*ggas off they axes fu*kin up just to gain/ Brain washed no change cuz they figure they can't/ While conservitives laugh on the way to the bank/ Gettin crumbs off the dollar thinkin you takin the cake/ when you like a girl with R.Kelly on a featuered tape/
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11-30-2005, 11:19 PM
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Whitewater!
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: New Zealand
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To be honest not a lot of rap looks good on paper.
You need the beat, and a friggin lucky one at that, to make rap lyrics happen. I didn't like the above, by the way.
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12-01-2005, 09:11 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: C-Berry 407!
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good rap happens... it looks like you spen too much time on this. Also the thing is... its very one way street-ish... you have to conme up with new and inivative ways to convey meaning.... straight rhymes aren't going to do it. the lyrics are liner....
.................A .................B .................A .................B the thing about good rap is that it flows and words are mixed up turned around and back, stutter stepped... its cool and artistic and almost anti poetic. thats what im not seeing in your rap... im seeing roses are red violets are blue. and so on. change it up but i LOVE the theme.... most rap is about bitches and hoes and 9's on yo waist. i love seeing meaningful lyrics... especially with the kind of hold rap has on the youth at this point.
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12-02-2005, 08:38 AM
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Music Addict
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: C-Berry 407!
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most popular rap? yes.
thats what sells... i take it you know about music... you know thats what sells.... the gangster lifestyle... you have to be kidding the MOST popular rap isnt about the falsified played out gangsta motif... underground rap... is beautiful.... heiruspecs... jedi mind tricks... **** like that.... i like alot... ****in citizen cope... good **** man.... BUT popular rap im afraid is dominated by the 50 cent's and the ****in east side boys of our time.
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12-03-2005, 07:50 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: NY...duh.
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12-05-2005, 02:46 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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