Rap Battles (quote)

jay7 · 03-16-2007, 02:02 PM

im rhymin off the top of ma dome while im chilin at home,
freestylin on banter but still poppin ma chrome,
ma lyrics get straight to the point en hit ya ears,
they straight up bold like britney spears,
these are lyrical lines spittin myrical rhymes,
got ma glock en ma nines while in sniffin them lines,

~~[MERIT]~~ · 03-16-2007, 02:26 PM

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Originally Posted by KRUGER

yeah, but it's freestlye, bro. i just keep going, and if i edited my rhymes, it would take away from the authenticity of it all. so i just quoted myself and kept going like it never stopped.

LOL. Freestyle? Like how it took you 13 minutes between those 2 posts to come up with 10 short lines? You apparently don't know the definition of "freestyle," do you?

jay7 · 03-16-2007, 02:46 PM

yo wats up giv me sum feed back on ma rhymes dude

KRUGER · 03-16-2007, 04:19 PM

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Originally Posted by oojay

LOL. Freestyle? Like how it took you 13 minutes between those 2 posts to come up with 10 short lines? You apparently don't know the definition of "freestyle," do you?

sorry, dude, i'm at work all day. and eventhough i would like to avoid responsibility, sometimes i have to leave the computer and actually do some work. it's freestyle if you typing it as it comes out dude! sorry you can't HEAR me come up with this sh!t.

~~TheUsedToolguy~~ · 03-16-2007, 04:25 PM

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Originally Posted by jay7

yo wats up giv me sum feed back on ma rhymes dude

not bad, wouldn't hurt to make it a little longer next time.

jay7 · 03-16-2007, 04:28 PM

thanks 4 advice i was gona mek it longa but just givin ya'll a taster lol

KRUGER · 03-16-2007, 04:34 PM

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Originally Posted by jay7

thanks 4 advice i was gona mek it longa but just givin ya'll a taster lol

oojay??????

~~[MERIT]~~ · 03-16-2007, 04:35 PM

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Originally Posted by KRUGER

oojay??????

LOL no.

jay7 · 03-16-2007, 04:37 PM

wat u mean

KRUGER · 03-16-2007, 04:39 PM

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Originally Posted by jay7

wat u mean

jay7=oojay. or, so it seems to me.

03-16-2007, 02:02 PM	#491 (permalink)
jay7 Groupie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 13	im rhymin off the top of ma dome while im chilin at home, freestylin on banter but still poppin ma chrome, ma lyrics get straight to the point en hit ya ears, they straight up bold like britney spears, these are lyrical lines spittin myrical rhymes, got ma glock en ma nines while in sniffin them lines, Last edited by jay7; 03-16-2007 at 02:14 PM.

03-16-2007, 02:46 PM	#493 (permalink)
jay7 Groupie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 13	yo wats up giv me sum feed back on ma rhymes dude

03-16-2007, 04:28 PM	#496 (permalink)
jay7 Groupie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 13	thanks 4 advice i was gona mek it longa but just givin ya'll a taster lol

03-16-2007, 04:37 PM	#499 (permalink)
jay7 Groupie Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 13	wat u mean