ProggyMan

Yep, there's two posts in the last day...

650623

those aint raps! where the freestyles at? whos out to network???? yay area style!

ProggyMan

Just toss out a one-liner, no reason to go overboard. I live in Berkeley, I've been in plenty of Middle School freestyle competitions at school, it just doesn't work on the internet.

TROY148

650623 by the time I'm done you wish you hadn't stepped to me/
you say you're stuntin/
sounds like straight frontin/
I'm no pro I make rhymes for nothin'/
But still I drop dimes like 13 on the Phoenix suns/
But still I drop fools like Stoudemire the chosen 1/
gimme 3 more bars and then I'm done
That's all it takes to drop you son
I could rip you all day just for fun
but It's not worth it, I'll just give you how much more?-none

Alfred

Ya fool, ya tool, what a shitty rap,
the crack o' my ass could rap better than that,


yeah, it's unoriginal

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TROY148

you get props for humor

WolfAtTheDoor

There are far too many grammatical errors,
within each of your rhymes, to give me the tremors.
You can't fight a war of words without a knowledge of language,
but kudos - you can be the filling, in my lyrical sandwich.

Alfred

You grammatically correct, arrogant prick,
your lyrical sandwich tastes like shit,
Grammar and knowledge won't earn you crap,
Go back to your books, you've got no place in rap

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[MERIT]

Yo it's unbelievable what what some cats'll pass off as raps/
You'll get popped and stomped like bubble wrap/ Straight broke in half/
You can call it a freestyle if that's what makes you feel better now/
Excuses for sh*tty rhymes cuz it's off the head'er? nahhhh/
Better be a go-getter now/ Flow steady now/
Study the skills and flow better now/ Just don't me ask how/
An hour's worth of style in a minute now/ Admit it now/
A mile a minute with styles that's in it to win it/ No limit now/
Yo, you can drop words like grammatically incorrect from your broke-down intellect/
A punctuation Nazi's whats left/ Through all the bullsh*t/ Get stepped/
Like stairs/ I get stared like stars and gazed like I'm famous/
Star-gazed like Uranus?/ Ain't that sh*t heinous?/
I'll straight rhyme the same words like the lamest/
But my swagger f*ckin' overtakes it/
Check, we can do away with the one liners/
Separate you small cats from the big dogs and big timers/
I rhyme tighter/ Choke cats out like cage fighters/
Give you more hits to the head than Zildjian's at John Bonhams/

WWWP

Word.
Bird.
Turd.
Assured.

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