TrampInaTux

Alright now stop cos you lot are making me cringe...
I'll leave you with a frown longer than an emo fringe
Unfortunately for you, I have some spare time
So I can bust heads snap limbs and maul you with a rhyme
All thriller
no filler
roar like Godzilla
shaming the Killah
Kid I don't wanna namecheck you, I'm adraid I'll make you famous
A shotgun full of insults, ready to make you brainless
Mentioning me in a lyric that was your first mistake
But having to edit your raps? That's the icing on the cake
You should feel honoured that I've dedicated a post to you
But soften that erection and clean up all the man juice
Cos you're not the only one whose raps reek of 'newbie'
There's some more that suck harder than your Mom when she blew me
OOO a your Momma joke!! You didn't see that one coming!!
Like you didn't see the gerbil I shoved up your arse when we were bumming
I've made a gay joke now, so you can't make one for me
You have no leg to stand on and no ***got jokes to bore me
Everyone step down cos Jesus has just spoken
Your words have been dismantled and your spirits have been broken
Whose next to step up? I wanna see some real skill
This was just the beginning, you've yet to see me in overkill...

RHYMEFESTkillah

not to sound like a jackass who thinks that everyone else sucks at rapping but dude, no filler? that whole thing was filler.
maybe its just your guy's rhyme style but you have zero punchlines, its all just quick filler with no real oomph. and dude, when you are trying to diss someone, its best not to talk about how YOU have had anal sex with them. (just a tip)

ill hit you back up later, ima go to sleep now.
be ready hommy

Blain

I sorta agree with some of that Hobo, you paid yourself out in the middle of an insult to him. kinda stupid

sleepy jack

I think RHYMEFEST takes this thread wayyy too seriously.

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Blain

Lol I just use it as a pass time, it's fun being pathetic at rapping

hiu

Hobojesus, you rap like you have no penis,
Grow a pair, buy a pair, get a pair, I don't care,
Just fuckin' stop with tha' wack raps ya'll,
Who do you think you kiddin' Eminem?
Bustin' your plasticine rhymes, I got no times,
For this bullshit you call rapping, go and grow some plaintain nigga,
More like necrophilia, you fuck up the dead bodies perineum.
Did I hear ruthenium? I'm harder than tha' platinum.
YAH HEARRR.
My raps may not flow, but it's better than eating your moms sorghum, she's the ho.

MoonlitSunshine

That it is, plus, it's funny making him angry...

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TrampInaTux

Erm.... okay?

I think the whole point of this thread is to reply back with a rap... not some statement... I'll make one back at hiu or somebody when I have time... I gotta get ready... I'm late again...

RHYMEFESTkillah

ur not makin me mad, i am usually excited when i have the oppurtunity to burn someone.

and crow, i don't get too serious bout keystyle battles on the internet

[MERIT]

listen to rhymefestkillah/ "ooh im a white boy rapper"/ youd best get a new gimmick/ your record's blemished/ every since i started breaking your rhymes down like a chemic/ your flow is elementary like it just got done ridin on the short bus/ why didnt you warn us?/ that every single word outta your mouth was gonna bore us/ you wanna show me disrespect/ thats okay i dont need your admiration/ i sense your intimidation/ cuz when i f**k you this bad its worse than 12 inches of penetration/ all these folks got their eyes on you musta broke your concentration/ you silly little caucasian/ your marriage to $hitty rhymes has definitely been consumated/ we may be different races but we shouldnt let that come between us/ just ask your penis/ its f**ked more black dudes than hurricane katrina/ i could rap all night but i think ill let you off with a warning/ cuz in the morning/ since i f**ked your mom im sure when i pee itll be burning