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Old 11-30-2005, 02:38 PM   #11 (permalink)
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well figured out me and tambo are both the same/ but checkin up IPs dude thats just pretty lame/ I got two accounts so I could give you twice the beating/ that car crash must have damaged your brain if you thought I was retreating/ there's no need to retreat if I haven't been bettered/ i leave you so cold you'll need to wear a sweater/ your material's so dry even your mom is wetter/ you ain't getting the message shall I write it out in letter's?/
G-O H-O-M-E and rethink your life/ cos I'm what fakers like you call Death and you've just tasted my scythe/ yes you've had a good run/ and some of your rhymes have been fun/ but as far as I'm concerned this battle's already been won........
im glad you returned/ it shows you got balls/ other than the ones on your chin everytime my pants fall/ 2 accounts? whats your problem? nevermind its clear as day/ one ready for backup when i blow the other away/ my flows are just starting, ive only begun/ a million ways to bash you but ill only need one/ so when youre material is ready/ you know where ill be/ but next time bring the skillz if you want to contest me/ oooh you mentioned my mother/ you must be insane/ try working on your humor before people start to complain/ you want me to get crazy? im like David Koresh/ tell your mom to ice her panties to keep her crabs fresh/ now that im off your mom, wait, ok now/ i see she swallows like you so i wont need a towell/ I hope you understand that im still warming up/ stick around for a bit and watch me erupt/ and when i do just beware that i just may make you cry/ and when everybodys laughing at you/ youll understand why/ you think youre winning this battle? you must be off of your meds/ i own people like you and at anytime will bash heads/ so give it up now before humiliation occurs/ your demise is inevitable/ im the judge and the jurrors.
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:14 PM   #12 (permalink)
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while i get better you just get worse/ come on take a look at that last verse/ i may not be as good as you yet, no you are right/ im better than you so lets just end this fight/ my third ever battle and you are looking a little shaken/ you said I cant rap man what you been taking/ seriously i AM the best there is Fenix/ I be coughing up ill flows like im buleamic/ when i say you suck man i really mean it/see you were good to begin with but then you trailed off/ and you're doing less and less *** jokes-are you going soft?/
Well now I'm going to give you just what you deserve/ you say you're the judge and the jury...well I'm the executioner....
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:29 PM   #13 (permalink)
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oh...and you say it takes you 2.47 seconds to think up a rap? well, im still waiting...
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:31 PM   #14 (permalink)
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this go's to Fenixpunk

cuz HoboJ wanted me to destroy you right quick.

I'm comin off top point blank period you comin with a style That we don't take serious/
I smoke you to the end with no residue left put tha Wesson to ya chin where the rest of you at?/
I don't even have to stunt when it come to the rhymes leaven ya ass in a stomp tryna fu*k wit one line/
and you fu*kin with S.B. thats a laugh for me it's a better chance of dame dash askin for cash from me/
or freeway fu*kin over cassidy you bastards see tryna master me/
I'm the master B turn ya life around become a pastor see/
Before I put you under ground make you part of the past to see/
Cause when I'm dissin niggas it's highly ridiculous you niggas can't see me cause you blinded with syphilis/
and who the fu*k is you to try and defy me I throw those bullets into two''s hook you up to a IV/
see I'm ruthless but cool you don't want to try me leave you shaken in your boots like the old age Ali/
how you gonna play me dawg you play with bloody draws/
eatin cat in the backseat lickin ladies Raw where I left my babies dawg/
I'm # one second to none leave ya ass with no lungs from givein mouth to a gun/
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:34 PM   #15 (permalink)
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this go's to Fenixpunk

cuz HoboJ wanted me to destroy you right quick.

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i didnt ask for your help... just wondered seen as you started the whole rappin thing whether you wanted to join in...
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:37 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Well I did so it's what eva.
no skin off my back
nai mean
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:39 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Hobojesus....you are absolutely correct

This battle has been won.


Sadly not by you.....
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:40 PM   #18 (permalink)
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SB or is that BS/ see I'd love to like your rhymes but they don't make any sense/ take a tip from fenix and go and burn/ before you mess with with the big boys theres a lot of stuff you still gotta learn
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:40 PM   #19 (permalink)
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oh...and you say it takes you 2.47 seconds to think up a rap? well, im still waiting...
im at work, and sometimes have to break away from the board to actually do work, so give me a sec while i finish some stuff i got to do.
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Old 11-30-2005, 03:41 PM   #20 (permalink)
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bungalow you wanna rap?
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