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The Erroneous Hoodlum
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: West Side Phoenix
Posts: 2,059
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I don’t need help, I run alone/
An army of one and harder than stone/ A breath of originality, while youre just a clone, Ive heard it all before the way you bitch and moan/ Kneeling at the foot of my throne, hoping ill throw you a bone/ With your imitation cologne and no skills of your own/ Following fenix like youre my own personal sheep/ You try to compete but everytime I go deep/ Putting subliminal thoughts in your subconscious mind/ Pulling the wool over your eyes make you think you were blind/ Silence every word that you speak till you think youre a mute/ Then laugh in your face with a middle finger salute/ My flows are like razors slice your eardrums till your deaf/ Then chop you and dice you quicker than a 5 star chef/ Spittin rhymes faster than a tommy gun, I cant be outdone/ Im impervious to pain while you sit there in agony/ Broken and battered from the beaten you’ve got from me/ Leave you lookin like youcame from a concentration camp/ You messed with the champ, I sealed your fate with my stamp/ My styles, my flows, my knowledge of hoes, the way I wear my clothes, none of it can ever be duplicated/ you can try and imitate it/ but I outshine everytime with the verses im creating/ ill write your first line for you so take out your pen- “damn that guy fenix keeps beating me again and again…” |
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Beaten? No man I ain't even phased/
I can run through you again and again and still not be dazed/ check out your flows they as ugly as your wife/ I'll leave you crying so much you'll be reaching for the knife/ You'll be on your knees saying you've had enough/ tears leaving your eyes and wetting your face muff/ This is the time where you leave the room/ get up, go out, I'm sure we'll meet soon/ How longs it been since you last replied?/ You was away for that long I thought you might have died/ So you come back and then think you can challenge me?/ Well I'm trice as strong, and more of a beast than your f*cking goatee/ So you say you're a mod, well you'll have to ban me/ You can't have a kid on this forum who can beat you so easily/ I'll think you'll find thats another point to me/ Another one, I'm on a killing spree/ So that's your last breath, and don't return/ you spent to much time away, I hope that's a lesson learned... |
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#3 (permalink) |
The Erroneous Hoodlum
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: West Side Phoenix
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ive spent some time away cuz i gotta make that bank/
not that you would know what thats like, youve got momma to thank/ a point for you? um lets see..no/ get me started and just see how far this hoodlum will go/ you should of taken the time i was gone and studied/ instead of kissing ass in the lounge cuz now your left bloodied/ ouch, you dissin my wife, dont sweat it/ if i was to take this seriously youd think twice and regret it/ leave you with more viruses than your mom spreads in a day/ your trying to be hardcore, but comin off like youre ***/ one day you might grow up and grow facial hair like me/ it grows on your chest and your balls, watch, youll see/ then you wont be lookin like a 12 yr old skank/ used up and discarded, youve got me to thank/ youve been beaten retarded if you think you can hang/ i run with 602, hillbillys in GA aint no thang/ |
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that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Fenix replied! My God celebrate/
I'm so excited, tell your wife to help me masturbate/ I need four hands to get the full pleasure/ you don't believe me? Here's a ruler, measure/ My Mom spreads viruses? Nah, I don't think so/ don't forget you're the one that married a ho/ Maybe YOU should think twice before messing with my flow/ You'll send me a virus just because you've been shown/ now take my advice while you still can/ stop thinking about hard drives, mega bites and RAM/ cos there's time and a place for rapping so mild/ And what's that place? Well it's called 8 mile. |
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The Erroneous Hoodlum
Join Date: Nov 2004
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why always jackin off, thats right, cant get none/
make sure the door is locked, and clean up when your done/ dont want momma findin stains on yer sheet/ or walkin in on ya while your poundin the meat/ shed have daddy sit you down and teach you about birds and bees/ "this is where babies come from hobo, now get down on your knees"/ i guess getting molested will cause you to become a chronic masturbator/ i wouldnt know, been gettin laid since i was a 5th grader/ while i was bangin the teacher, you was gettin banged by the preacher/ while im gettin head in my boat, youre takin a load down your throat/ i roll on dubs with a system thats bumpin while you ride a schwinn and peak when your parents are humpin/ tryin to get a glimpse of what grown ups do past your bedtime/ cuz momma put a parental block on your comp when youre online/ saw you lookin up ghey porn and swore it would be the last time/ dont feel bad everybodys not doing, despite what you hear/ well, ok, everyone but you, but thats no reason to go queer/ and if you enjoy all the **** in the ass that youve got in the past, good for you/ theres clubs and meetings you can go where people support you/ im sure theirs plent in GA so they wont be hard to find/ just look for the rainbow flags on the sign/ now you cant look me in the eye cuz you know its all true/ ive exposed hobo like your daddy exposes himself to you/ id call the cops on the douche bag and cut of his manhood/ but it seems to me you like it, so go on, its all good. |
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that's my war face.
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Never thought I'd do this, but I'm backing down. I have nothing to say to that. You have actually managed to infect me with writers block. Got to give you my respect there, I have been beaten. Even though that s**t ain't true by the way-read my name, I'm freakin Jesus! The priests suck MY dck!
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Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Missouri, USA
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my technique is insaciable/
my lyrics are irreplacable/ my pool of rhymes is olympic size/ youre still swimmin' in a kiddie pool/ youre nothin but cheap plywood with a mahogany finish/ but im droppin' more bills than ted kennedy in the senate/ this aint east coast, west coast, dirty souf, or hotlanta but youre fixin' to get your bell rung worse than a salvation army santa/ cuz im reppin' mid-MO ive got my money on the line/ f**k biggie or 2pac im the best rapper of all time/ ive been gone for a minute i was takin' a little sabatacle/ now im puttin' an end to your games like jesus in the tabernacle/ i write more essays than a mexican pen pal/ your rhymes got me rollin' on the floor like a pentacostal revival/ im under your skin worse than a prison tattoo/ youre about to get owned like a plantation jiggaboo/ like a pair of rabbit ears im altering your perception/ the name oojay will never leave your reccolection/ im in the subconscious of your mind/ you all are two of a kind/ youre flavors of the week/ im the greatest of all time/ cuz you just wanna corrupt me and disrupt me but theres no way you can even touch me cuz you disgust me you better trust me if you wanna f**k with me youre gonna get busted |
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