heres a song i made up... (lyrics, punk, tune, quote)

Spikey · 11-22-2005, 07:19 AM

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Originally Posted by DontRunMeOver

I'm with Spikey here, thinking that its a bit crap to slate lyrics so much - particularly after creaming yourselves so thoroughly over Rise Against Rocks lame prose. You never know, this lyrics might actually fit to a SONG, not just the fluid encrusted pages of some adolescent cry-baby's "journal".

So, while I'm not saying that sk8erbabii's lyrics are world-beating right now, I'm going to congratulate sk7erbabii for at least writing something WITH A DECENT METER which is more than most people who've posted lyrics here can claim.

I agree totally! This is mean behaviour! And her even doing that is better than your horrid comments!

riseagainstrocks · 11-22-2005, 01:56 PM

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Originally Posted by DontRunMeOver

I'm with Spikey here, thinking that its a bit crap to slate lyrics so much - particularly after creaming yourselves so thoroughly over Rise Against Rocks lame prose. You never know, this lyrics might actually fit to a SONG, not just the fluid encrusted pages of some adolescent cry-baby's "journal".

As much as I like criticism, my words fit into songs. no they aren't the kind you hear on the radio. That is commenly reffered to as trash. And if you had taken the time to read them, you'd notice that I don't talk about being a nobody, or killing someone, or hating someone. I write what I feel. I don't feel like cutting or harming myself. I feel anger sometimes but it is never in a self-destructive manner.

Not all lyrics need to rhyme. And if you have suggestions, I'd be happy to read them in the topics I created. Blasting my "lame prose" in a completely different forum is quite cowardly.

sk8erbabii69 · 11-22-2005, 02:38 PM

O.k Heres The Deal....i Wasnt Expecting Every One To Love It....i Just Wanted Opinions...you Know Im 12 Years Old & If I Do Say So Myself I Thought It Was Pretty Good 4 A 12 Year Old...it Really Describes My Life...cuz Ive Never Won Any Thing,& Stuff Like That...but To The People Who Didnt Say Anything Bad About It....thank You...to The People Who Just Had To Be A-holes.....

& THIS IS WHAT I WANT TO DO 2 U

~~bungalow~~ · 11-22-2005, 02:39 PM

your song still sucks, even for an 8 year old

sleepy jack · 11-22-2005, 02:42 PM

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Originally Posted by sk8erbabii69

O.k Heres The Deal....i Wasnt Expecting Every One To Love It....i Just Wanted Opinions...you Know Im 12 Years Old & If I Do Say So Myself I Thought It Was Pretty Good 4 A 12 Year Old...it Really Describes My Life...cuz Ive Never Won Any Thing,& Stuff Like That...but To The People Who Didnt Say Anything Bad About It....thank You...to The People Who Just Had To Be A-holes.....

& THIS IS WHAT I WANT TO DO 2 U

Ummm we gave opinions it was crappy.
So now were bad people for giving opinions even though you wanted opinions?
OH i get the opinions had to be going "WOIW YOUR GONNA BE HUGE THOSE LYRICS ARE AMAZING"
Sorry some people still have spines and are willing to speak their minds.

Merkaba · 11-22-2005, 02:44 PM

You know it'd do better to just leave her alone. It may not be that fantastic but no one else here is eather.

I know I'd rather read those lonely lyrics than some of the die die die I love satan songs that I've seen in the Song Thread.

~~bungalow~~ · 11-22-2005, 02:46 PM

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Originally Posted by sk8erbabii69

O.k Heres The Deal....i Wasnt Expecting Every One To Love It....i Just Wanted Opinions...you Know Im 12 Years Old & If I Do Say So Myself I Thought It Was Pretty Good 4 A 12 Year Old...it Really Describes My Life...cuz Ive Never Won Any Thing,& Stuff Like That...but To The People Who Didnt Say Anything Bad About It....thank You...to The People Who Just Had To Be A-holes.....

& THIS IS WHAT I WANT TO DO 2 U

Your 12, and 69 is in your username.....do you even know what that means?

sleepy jack · 11-22-2005, 02:48 PM

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Originally Posted by Merkaba

You know it'd do better to just leave her alone. It may not be that fantastic but no one else here is eather.

Riseagainstrocks lyrics are way times better then hers and not to sound egostistical mine are too.

Merkaba · 11-22-2005, 02:56 PM

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Originally Posted by MIsfitspunk

Riseagainstrocks lyrics are way times better then hers and not to sound egostistical mine are too.

I know, and I like the way both of you guys write. What I'm saying is it's not like we haven't seen worse songs, and we never sledged those other songs half as much as this one.

I don't know if it's cause it's in the lounge or whatever but it copped way more than it should of. At least she's learning now though, giving it a go, give her a few years and she might not be all that bad.

sleepy jack · 11-22-2005, 02:59 PM

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Originally Posted by Merkaba

I know, and I like the way both of you guys write. What I'm saying is it's not like we haven't seen worse songs, and we never sledged those other songs half as much as this one.

I don't know if it's cause it's in the lounge or whatever but it copped way more than it should of. At least she's learning now though, giving it a go, give her a few years and she might not be all that bad.

I was just replying to the "It may not be that fantastic but no one else here is eather" part but yes we've seen worse but usually their in the song writing thread which consists of critism that is more constructive post it in the lounge its gonna get a bunch of negative replies if it sucks.

11-22-2005, 02:38 PM	#43 (permalink)
sk8erbabii69 Groupie Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: southern alabama Posts: 12	O.k Heres The Deal....i Wasnt Expecting Every One To Love It....i Just Wanted Opinions...you Know Im 12 Years Old & If I Do Say So Myself I Thought It Was Pretty Good 4 A 12 Year Old...it Really Describes My Life...cuz Ive Never Won Any Thing,& Stuff Like That...but To The People Who Didnt Say Anything Bad About It....thank You...to The People Who Just Had To Be A-holes..... & THIS IS WHAT I WANT TO DO 2 U __________________ IM NOT HIGH IM JUST REALLY RANDOM

11-22-2005, 02:44 PM	#46 (permalink)
Merkaba Whitewater! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: New Zealand Posts: 2,885	You know it'd do better to just leave her alone. It may not be that fantastic but no one else here is eather. I know I'd rather read those lonely lyrics than some of the die die die I love satan songs that I've seen in the Song Thread. __________________ She thinks I'm a reclusive genius, she's going to be very disappointed when she finds out i'm a reclusive wanker

11-22-2005, 02:39 PM	#44 (permalink)
~~bungalow~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Hot-lanta Posts: 3,140	your song still sucks, even for an 8 year old