some of my poetry (rock, member, quote, memory, Inci)

riseagainstrocks · 11-08-2005, 01:50 PM

1. I liked the flow of this. and it is spelled "incisions"

2. this is really, really short, but seeing as it is poetry, it isn't bad but I don't understand the adjustment line.

3. I never ever say very good. But I will here. This is very good. It speaks to me somehow. I like this.

runawaymylilnightmare · 11-08-2005, 04:39 PM

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Originally Posted by riseagainstrocks

1. I liked the flow of this. and it is spelled "incisions"

2. this is really, really short, but seeing as it is poetry, it isn't bad but I don't understand the adjustment line.-adjustment being a public execution adjusting the rope as in someone's being hung or whichever kind of dark i know....

3. I never ever say very good. But I will here. This is very good. It speaks to me somehow. I like this.

thanks for the imput i am new to writing and appreciate it lots!

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riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,297	1. I liked the flow of this. and it is spelled "incisions" 2. this is really, really short, but seeing as it is poetry, it isn't bad but I don't understand the adjustment line. 3. I never ever say very good. But I will here. This is very good. It speaks to me somehow. I like this. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...