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Old 10-30-2005, 02:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default The pain i hide inside

You were my hero, always doing right
people would judge you
and i would jump to your side
but then we had to separate, tore me apart
each time you came to visit, was filled with joy
oh, but you had to go away, tried to make you stay
but you let go of me over & over again


If you could look into my eyes
you would see the pain i hide inside
cuz you werent here
to take away my fear

(Chorus)
Whyyyyyyyyyyyy
..........
I sighhhhhhhhhhh
..........
I'll cryyyyyyyyyyy
..........
Tonnnnightttttt
And forever more
Forever more


You decided to move in with us,
we all thought it was the right thing to do
missed out on the older ones lives
How about mine and the little ones
slowly, i started to realise some flaws about you
you started to say and do things
i know my hero would never do
you crushed a part of all of us mentally
what made you so damn cruel


If you could look in my eyes
you would see th pain i hide inside
cuz you are here
and you're just adding to my fears

(Chorus)


You decided we werent good enough{or something}
And up and left one fickal day
knew it was coming, but hell, didnt know it would go that way
i still question why to this day
you left a hole in our hearts, hope you're happy daddy
of course, now we talk to you, but it aint never gonna to be the same
again you've let go of me, when i needed you the most
now you're always telling me that you think i dont love you
need to realize i do, but i let you go from being my hero

If you could look into my eyes
You would see the pain i hide inside
cuz you'll never be here
to shove away my fears

(Chorus)
[chorus repeated & fading away]
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Old 10-30-2005, 08:24 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm sure this has some deep meaning for you about some boyfriend or something, but this is one of the worst songs i have read in a long time.

The chorus. wow. change. i don't know what to but do.

and how can a day be fickal? is that even how you spell fickal? I DON'T KNOW!
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Old 10-30-2005, 08:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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^ I think it's about her Dad...

But apart from that I agree with you.
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:08 AM   #4 (permalink)
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isn't a reason to write bad songs.
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Old 10-30-2005, 09:53 AM   #5 (permalink)
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So true..
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Old 10-30-2005, 10:00 AM   #6 (permalink)
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i thikn it is quite a personal song

so i guess anyone who hasnt been there, where ever that is, wouldnt get it

im not getting at risegainstrocks or insideout because personally i dont like it either, but i like to cover my ass
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Old 10-30-2005, 10:20 AM   #7 (permalink)
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The problem with deeply personal is it only makes sense to you. Songs are inherently for entertainment purposes. If your not writing it to entertain people, get a journal.
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Old 10-30-2005, 10:37 AM   #8 (permalink)
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thats a good point, i wrote a song that was very personal to me and everyone thought i was insane.

i want a sugar skull!!!
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Old 10-30-2005, 04:52 PM   #9 (permalink)
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thats a good point, i wrote a song that was very personal to me and everyone thought i was insane.

i want a sugar skull!!!
I know, I superimposed the tone of that statement into Johnny, but still its the funniest thing he's written.
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Old 11-12-2005, 10:17 PM   #10 (permalink)
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BabyGurl, question, who is the song about? Boyfriend? Ex-husband? Father?...
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