|
Register | Blogging | Today's Posts | Search |
|
Thread Tools | Display Modes |
10-30-2005, 02:15 AM | #1 (permalink) |
ghettochik
Join Date: Jul 2005
Posts: 80
|
The pain i hide inside
You were my hero, always doing right
people would judge you and i would jump to your side but then we had to separate, tore me apart each time you came to visit, was filled with joy oh, but you had to go away, tried to make you stay but you let go of me over & over again If you could look into my eyes you would see the pain i hide inside cuz you werent here to take away my fear (Chorus) Whyyyyyyyyyyyy .......... I sighhhhhhhhhhh .......... I'll cryyyyyyyyyyy .......... Tonnnnightttttt And forever more Forever more You decided to move in with us, we all thought it was the right thing to do missed out on the older ones lives How about mine and the little ones slowly, i started to realise some flaws about you you started to say and do things i know my hero would never do you crushed a part of all of us mentally what made you so damn cruel If you could look in my eyes you would see th pain i hide inside cuz you are here and you're just adding to my fears (Chorus) You decided we werent good enough{or something} And up and left one fickal day knew it was coming, but hell, didnt know it would go that way i still question why to this day you left a hole in our hearts, hope you're happy daddy of course, now we talk to you, but it aint never gonna to be the same again you've let go of me, when i needed you the most now you're always telling me that you think i dont love you need to realize i do, but i let you go from being my hero If you could look into my eyes You would see the pain i hide inside cuz you'll never be here to shove away my fears (Chorus) [chorus repeated & fading away] |
10-30-2005, 08:24 AM | #2 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: DC
Posts: 3,320
|
I'm sure this has some deep meaning for you about some boyfriend or something, but this is one of the worst songs i have read in a long time.
The chorus. wow. change. i don't know what to but do. and how can a day be fickal? is that even how you spell fickal? I DON'T KNOW!
__________________
One note timeless, came out of nowhere... |
10-30-2005, 10:00 AM | #6 (permalink) |
i am the cookie monster
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: in the middle of ****ing nowhere
Posts: 122
|
i thikn it is quite a personal song
so i guess anyone who hasnt been there, where ever that is, wouldnt get it im not getting at risegainstrocks or insideout because personally i dont like it either, but i like to cover my ass
__________________
i don't wanna come back down from this cloud |
10-30-2005, 10:20 AM | #7 (permalink) |
killedmyraindog
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Boston, Massachusetts
Posts: 11,172
|
The problem with deeply personal is it only makes sense to you. Songs are inherently for entertainment purposes. If your not writing it to entertain people, get a journal.
__________________
I've moved to a new address |
10-30-2005, 10:37 AM | #8 (permalink) |
i am the cookie monster
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: in the middle of ****ing nowhere
Posts: 122
|
thats a good point, i wrote a song that was very personal to me and everyone thought i was insane.
i want a sugar skull!!!
__________________
i don't wanna come back down from this cloud |
10-30-2005, 04:52 PM | #9 (permalink) | |
killedmyraindog
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Boston, Massachusetts
Posts: 11,172
|
Quote:
__________________
I've moved to a new address |
|
|