Magicl or Merriment (lyric, rock, quote, Gender)

Ma Cherie · 09-28-2005, 09:48 AM

Magical or merriment

Magical or merriment
I can give you what you want
If you give me what I need

Whatever you want
I'll give it
What ever i need
Must have it

If you know the rules
Then lets begin
I need something sacred
Of yours, everthing has a price

Magical or merriment
I have your truth
You need my answers

Anything of value makes the pay
the price will be high
do you truly want it?
Its a pearl of great price

Magical or Merriment
If you truly what the wisdom
You gotta pay the price

Magical or Merriment
Soft glowing thoughts
For red crimson eyes

Can you pay the cost
Your blood could pour
On the stones of sacrifice
Can you deal with the price

Can you deel with the truth
The bibed fox loves to play its tricks
Will you see through the illusion
Or shall it over come you?

When the truth is known
And the illusion fades
Where will you be
If you price is payed

Magical or merriment
Like all that is a fantasy
Life is but a vantiy

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Ma Cherie · 09-28-2005, 09:50 AM

got the idea reading XxXHolic by Clamp
it's a manga

Online_belisha_Promoter · 09-28-2005, 11:46 AM

it's good

DontRunMeOver · 09-29-2005, 05:33 AM

This one was ok. On the positive side, the more unexpected phrases were good and mostly seemed like ones which sound good when spoken/sung too. On the negative side, the first three verses/paragraphs (whatever you call them) were too vague, they didn't create enough interest or give me enough direction from which to read the rest of the lyric. Once I'd read it through once though and then re-read it, it made more sense.

So my suggestion would be re-write it slightly to give a bit more direction at the beginning, write something a bit more interesting in the first 8 lines to catch people's attention and to give them a better starting block from which to run through the rest of the lyric.

That's just my opinion of course!

Ma Cherie · 09-29-2005, 09:57 AM

its alright, its my first one with out collaberation, my other one whwere with my "girl friend" as some would probaly call her, they are all decent.

riseagainstrocks · 10-02-2005, 04:41 PM

"Can you deel with the truth
The bibed fox loves to play its tricks
Will you see through the illusion
Or shall it over come you?"

Misspelled deal but that is irrelevant. I like this line. Is it supposed to be bribed? anywho, nice idea with the illusion.

Ma Cherie · 10-05-2005, 01:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by riseagainstrocks

"Can you deel with the truth
The bibed fox loves to play its tricks
Will you see through the illusion
Or shall it over come you?"

Misspelled deal but that is irrelevant. I like this line. Is it supposed to be bribed? anywho, nice idea with the illusion.

it an allusion to japanese myths suronding the diety Inari, the God/Goddess(it has both genders) of rice, illusions, magic, children,and foxes. represented as a fox with a bib on its neck

riseagainstrocks · 10-05-2005, 06:35 PM

ah bibed. as in a bib. I was pronoucing a long I. gotcha

Ma Cherie · 10-06-2005, 10:14 AM

yeah and it refers to a mythological trckster and if you play his/her game right you get one of your desires

09-28-2005, 09:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	Magicl or Merriment Magical or merriment Magical or merriment I can give you what you want If you give me what I need Whatever you want I'll give it What ever i need Must have it If you know the rules Then lets begin I need something sacred Of yours, everthing has a price Magical or merriment I have your truth You need my answers Anything of value makes the pay the price will be high do you truly want it? Its a pearl of great price Magical or Merriment If you truly what the wisdom You gotta pay the price Magical or Merriment Soft glowing thoughts For red crimson eyes Can you pay the cost Your blood could pour On the stones of sacrifice Can you deal with the price Can you deel with the truth The bibed fox loves to play its tricks Will you see through the illusion Or shall it over come you? When the truth is known And the illusion fades Where will you be If you price is payed Magical or merriment Like all that is a fantasy Life is but a vantiy ---------------------- __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

09-28-2005, 09:50 AM	#2 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	got the idea reading XxXHolic by Clamp it's a manga __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

09-29-2005, 09:57 AM	#5 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	its alright, its my first one with out collaberation, my other one whwere with my "girl friend" as some would probaly call her, they are all decent. __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

10-02-2005, 04:41 PM	#6 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	"Can you deel with the truth The bibed fox loves to play its tricks Will you see through the illusion Or shall it over come you?" Misspelled deal but that is irrelevant. I like this line. Is it supposed to be bribed? anywho, nice idea with the illusion. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

10-05-2005, 06:35 PM	#8 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	ah bibed. as in a bib. I was pronoucing a long I. gotcha __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

09-28-2005, 11:46 AM	#3 (permalink)
Online_belisha_Promoter Groupie Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: wales Posts: 7	it's good

09-29-2005, 05:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
DontRunMeOver They call me Tundra Boy Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: In your linen cupboard. Posts: 1,166	This one was ok. On the positive side, the more unexpected phrases were good and mostly seemed like ones which sound good when spoken/sung too. On the negative side, the first three verses/paragraphs (whatever you call them) were too vague, they didn't create enough interest or give me enough direction from which to read the rest of the lyric. Once I'd read it through once though and then re-read it, it made more sense. So my suggestion would be re-write it slightly to give a bit more direction at the beginning, write something a bit more interesting in the first 8 lines to catch people's attention and to give them a better starting block from which to run through the rest of the lyric. That's just my opinion of course!

10-06-2005, 10:14 AM	#9 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	yeah and it refers to a mythological trckster and if you play his/her game right you get one of your desires __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori