I Need Help (rock, single, member, quote, band)

FallenAngels · 09-25-2005, 03:53 AM

I Need Help Me And My Band Fallen Angels Are Haveing A Hard Time Writeing Songs Can Some one Help Us

jibber · 09-25-2005, 05:18 AM

.....what do you want us to do, write the f*cking song for you?

here's a few pointers:
it's "Having", not "Haveing"
it's "Writing", not "Writeing"
and it's "Someone", not "Some one"

ArtistInTheAmbulance · 09-25-2005, 05:55 AM

Remember kids, grammar is your friend

Just write about something besides "I want to slit my wrists, I can't believe she hates me so much, Im leaving home" and Im sure you'll be fine. Providing you dont capitalise every single letter, mind you..

TheBig3 · 09-25-2005, 10:02 AM

yeah, and I know your gunna bomb close to that so I think MBers should give you topics to write about. It will be hard to write about such crazy specific topics, but do your research, and work at it. If you write songs that are hard to do, you'll only get better. Here are my offerings:

1. How eating eggs is really eating chicken period
2. Breaking down in the desert and being paranoid about being eaten by wolves
3. Not being able to write songs about something other than slashing your wrists.

riseagainstrocks · 09-25-2005, 03:40 PM

Fallen Angel = worst band name ever.

well not THE worst. but close

and jibber, damn you on beating me to the position of grammer nazi.

ladyluckrules · 09-25-2005, 03:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheBig3KilledMyRainDog

1. How eating eggs is really eating chicken period

:0 we're on the same brain waves laddy!

jibber · 09-25-2005, 08:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by riseagainstrocks

and jibber, damn you on beating me to the position of grammer nazi.

what can I say, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.

Ma Cherie · 10-10-2005, 11:19 AM

i can help depending on what you want , by the band name you seem to want dark rock... right?

FallenAngels · 10-29-2005, 05:14 AM

were in to dark rock

BabyGurl928 · 10-30-2005, 01:07 AM

how 'bout writin' 'bout how ya see da world, in otha words, da world in ya point of view

or 'bout da "darkest" dat ya "fallin' in" , in otha words, da troubles dat are in ya lyfe at da moment

or why ya ppl. call ya selfz Fallen Angels

09-25-2005, 03:53 AM	#1 (permalink)
FallenAngels Groupie Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Indianapolis,Indiana Posts: 7	I Need Help I Need Help Me And My Band Fallen Angels Are Haveing A Hard Time Writeing Songs Can Some one Help Us

09-25-2005, 05:18 AM	#2 (permalink)
jibber Freeskier Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople... Posts: 1,536	.....what do you want us to do, write the f*cking song for you? here's a few pointers: it's "Having", not "Haveing" it's "Writing", not "Writeing" and it's "Someone", not "Some one" __________________ What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road. William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass. HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER

09-25-2005, 05:55 AM	#3 (permalink)
ArtistInTheAmbulance enchanted. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: cornwailles, angleterre. Posts: 2,537	Remember kids, grammar is your friend Just write about something besides "I want to slit my wrists, I can't believe she hates me so much, Im leaving home" and Im sure you'll be fine. Providing you dont capitalise every single letter, mind you.. __________________ shake your wings like theyre laced with sound!

09-25-2005, 10:02 AM	#4 (permalink)
TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	yeah, and I know your gunna bomb close to that so I think MBers should give you topics to write about. It will be hard to write about such crazy specific topics, but do your research, and work at it. If you write songs that are hard to do, you'll only get better. Here are my offerings: 1. How eating eggs is really eating chicken period 2. Breaking down in the desert and being paranoid about being eaten by wolves 3. Not being able to write songs about something other than slashing your wrists. __________________ I've moved to a new address

09-25-2005, 03:40 PM	#5 (permalink)
riseagainstrocks Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: DC Posts: 3,320	Fallen Angel = worst band name ever. well not THE worst. but close and jibber, damn you on beating me to the position of grammer nazi. __________________ One note timeless, came out of nowhere...

10-10-2005, 11:19 AM	#8 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	i can help depending on what you want , by the band name you seem to want dark rock... right? __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

10-29-2005, 05:14 AM	#9 (permalink)
FallenAngels Groupie Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Indianapolis,Indiana Posts: 7	ya were in to dark rock __________________ Fallen Angels Band Members Victoria Bennett Lead Singer Ronald Moore Lead Guitar Brianna Pruett Backup Singer Mike Bass Justin Drums I Forgot Mike ANd Justin's Last Name's

10-30-2005, 01:07 AM	#10 (permalink)
BabyGurl928 ghettochik Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 80	how 'bout writin' 'bout how ya see da world, in otha words, da world in ya point of view or 'bout da "darkest" dat ya "fallin' in" , in otha words, da troubles dat are in ya lyfe at da moment or why ya ppl. call ya selfz Fallen Angels