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Old 02-22-2025, 11:23 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Ruby Slipper View Post
Having read the lyrics above, they seem kind of pedestrian to me. That's not to say those kinds of feelings don't deserve to be expressed. I'd certainly agree they do. If you're of an artistic nature and someone has hurt you badly, it seems only natural to want to put your feelings in writing and work them out that way. ...However, the person who wrote those lyrics didn't do it in what I'd consider a very artful or thought provoking way. I expect a little more from my music and song lyrics - imagery, symbolism, a moving or meaningful turn of phrase. I don't get any of that from the lyrics above. Therefore: pedestrian. He could have worked a whole lot harder on those lyrics and come up with something better, but I'd guess that's not this lyric writer's forte and most of the other songs this person writes are pedestrian, too.
I get what you're saying. It definitely feels like the lyrics could've used more depth or creativity. Sometimes, the raw emotion comes through, but without the extra layer of artistry, it can come across as a bit flat. I guess it depends on what you're looking for in music sometimes simple works, but other times you want something that really makes you think.
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