Are These Lyrics Legit???

**Scarlett O'Hara** · 05-24-2014, 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Darkenevils

It seems to me most of you are judging by the small word's I dont get it is not a god damn college test where there suppose to be big capital word's apply to it you make me sick and btw I seem songs with the same style as mine's I didn't made this for grown bastards to enjoy not even for teenagers just for children's below 15 and I was asking if it was fair bot that if it existed on site let me explain who I am I am a vocalist with a friend who's trying to get a grand for his own studio he's going to have me be working in he's 52 years old and he knows what's good when he see's it all you judgmental adult's should act more matured when you see deathcore lyrics your acting like a child on a forum pity me it only inspires me to change it until I force you guys to like it, I heard better opinion by people I already showed this song to but I shouldn't worry I saw this coming they warn me about the negatively and I for real I would've have done better if I have instruments playing before I decided to write but is going to be like that when my best friend get's his grand for the studio it doesn't better I got more song's from which came from and I heard worst bands lyrics compare to mines but I'm guessing half you guys dont have taste in anything so I'm going by a song dedication your bands your comparing to mines"Asking Alexandria - Relentless And reckless" thanks you really do give me the inspiration I need to continue to write deathcore is just the negatively I need to burn down.

Why ask for opinions if you can't accept them? I don't think it's the simple words so much but the concept of the song was very basic to me. I think you could put in some more personality into it.

ladyislingering · 05-25-2014, 12:43 AM

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Originally Posted by Darkenevils

It seems to me most of you are judging by the small word's I dont get it is not a god damn college test where there suppose to be big capital word's apply to it you make me sick and btw I seem songs with the same style as mine's I didn't made this for grown bastards to enjoy not even for teenagers just for children's below 15 and I was asking if it was fair bot that if it existed on site let me explain who I am I am a vocalist with a friend who's trying to get a grand for his own studio he's going to have me be working in he's 52 years old and he knows what's good when he see's it all you judgmental adult's should act more matured when you see deathcore lyrics your acting like a child on a forum pity me it only inspires me to change it until I force you guys to like it, I heard better opinion by people I already showed this song to but I shouldn't worry I saw this coming they warn me about the negatively and I for real I would've have done better if I have instruments playing before I decided to write but is going to be like that when my best friend get's his grand for the studio it doesn't better I got more song's from which came from and I heard worst bands lyrics compare to mines but I'm guessing half you guys dont have taste in anything so I'm going by a song dedication your bands your comparing to mines"Asking Alexandria - Relentless And reckless" thanks you really do give me the inspiration I need to continue to write deathcore is just the negatively I need to burn down.

do we have an award for "longest run-on sentence in the history of humanity" for this guy?

shit's impressive.

~~Darkenevils~~ · 05-25-2014, 10:58 AM

Perfect what should I write then since my voice, growls ,screams raw anyways from what mark said.

**Janszoon** · 05-25-2014, 12:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Darkenevils

Perfect what should I write then since my voice, growls ,screams raw anyways from what mark said.

Write a death metal song about broccoli.

~~Darkenevils~~ · 05-25-2014, 06:18 PM

How bout this when I get my next tattoo

666 666

Gunna pay my bastard couzin a pay back visit with a spray paint on his door

**Frownland** · 05-25-2014, 07:35 PM

Thread of the year 2014 I can feel it.

Moss · 05-25-2014, 08:00 PM

Too legit. Too legit for you to quit.

ladyislingering · 05-25-2014, 11:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Janszoon

Write a death metal song about broccoli.

Br-o-c-coli, veggie of the beast

~~Darkenevils~~ · 05-27-2014, 08:04 PM

Fall to doom

Never again
Will I taste thy bitter thy bitter
To this day

"Hold this seed"

Never again
Will I fall-for-the green afro that grows below this dirt

"burn this seed"

(I will hold my breath)

For the once
Too undeadly vegetable feed this
Madness

Cooking, but I can't feel my bones
My skin craving
From the stinking smell

But I wont give up my life
I wont give up my life
"At all"
(At all)
"At all"

Screw this
You drain me into my madness
But I can feel it growing be-neath
Feeding of the rain
Ask I bite

(Hold me down)

The last time
This is not what I asked too
The tastelessly un favor

Is vegetable
Is vegetable

This makes me sick
You make me sick

hate me now

Fcck

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Originally Posted by ladyislingering

Br-o-c-coli, veggie of the beast

I might update them asoon as I get recording

bob. · 05-27-2014, 09:09 PM

personally i love it

even though broccoli grows above the dirt

i love it!

05-25-2014, 10:58 AM	#13 (permalink)
~~Darkenevils~~ Account Disabled Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 7	Are These Lyrics Leggit??? Perfect what should I write then since my voice, growls ,screams raw anyways from what mark said.

05-25-2014, 06:18 PM	#15 (permalink)
~~Darkenevils~~ Account Disabled Join Date: May 2014 Posts: 7	These lyrics legit??? How bout this when I get my next tattoo 666 666 Gunna pay my bastard couzin a pay back visit with a spray paint on his door Last edited by Darkenevils; 05-25-2014 at 06:30 PM.

05-25-2014, 07:35 PM	#16 (permalink)
Frownland SOPHIE FOREVER Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: East of the Southern North American West Posts: 35,541	Thread of the year 2014 I can feel it. __________________ Studies show that when a given norm is changed in the face of the unchanging, the remaining contradictions will parallel the truth. d e a f b o x

05-27-2014, 09:09 PM	#20 (permalink)
bob. Still sends his reguards. Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Trying to get out of the cat town.... Posts: 5,039	personally i love it even though broccoli grows above the dirt i love it! __________________ A kiss is the beginning of cannibalism. Reach out, pierce the fine fabric of the sheltering sky, take repose.

05-25-2014, 08:00 PM	#17 (permalink)
Moss Scuttle Buttin' Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Boulder Colorado Posts: 972	Too legit. Too legit for you to quit.