any band need some songs? (lyrics, tune, Harp, Hang)

pompom · 10-14-2004, 05:48 AM

i used to write poems and my mate said they were really good and one day i turned my poems into songs so i was lookin for a band that i could give them to so that they might actually become useful instead of just buildin up into a mountain collecting dust. one of my poems was turned into a song and was added to by a film star and now its going to be the theme tune to a music. i dont exactly know when the music is out but hopefully i'll be invited to the opening of it. i wish i had a band but no-one is interested in that at the mo so i will just keep writing.

pompom · 10-14-2004, 06:05 AM

come on someone post something please pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pompom · 10-14-2004, 07:16 AM

i guess i aint good enough for no-one.

covle · 10-14-2004, 07:25 AM

post some of your stuff

pompom · 10-14-2004, 07:31 AM

Can’t give it up….

I tear my skin deep and thick
I pierce my own flesh,
The wound is long and wide
The blood that pours is fresh.
I try to listen to the things you say
But ignored the advice you gave,
Dangerous is what I’ve done now
I could end up in an early grave.
I used sharp blades, sharp tipped points
And many other sharp things,
My skin all red and open wide
Burns, sore and stings.

No matter how hard I try
I cannot give it u,
A stream of red, my dripping blood
Could even fill a cup.
I’ll have to try to pull myself together
That needs a lot of strength,
But this time is to long for me
I need a shorter length.
I don’t know who to turn to
I need to look for help,
Really I can’t do this
I can’t do this all by myself!

I guess if try I can do it
If I try hard enough,
I cannot just sit here
If you help me, I will not give up!

pompom
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pompom · 10-14-2004, 07:32 AM

Right and wrong

Everywhere I go I feel
Like everything is wrong,
People are always fighting
And running from where they belong.
People tell me that it’s ok
And that it will be alright,
Even though people are hurting others
All throughout the night.

I look at the world we live in
Which is no longer safe,
It doesn’t matter where you hide
There is no hiding place.
This world is always changing
Everyday is really tough,
The streets are no place for children
The others who walk them too rough.

With a world full of violence
What can you say is right?
Who will help the needy
If you will not tonight?
A world full of anger
People full of rage,
If violence stops here
Please re-write this page.

pompom
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Opium · 10-14-2004, 04:56 PM

You have to take rhythm into consideration. Just because the words rhyme doesn't mean you're capable of turning sentences into melody.

Try jotting down ideas and then twisting them into a beat. I've always worked that way, and I doubt it'll ever let anyone else down. Don't stop writing.

Am I allowed to post my lyrics somewhere too, or does pompom say nay?

jibber · 10-14-2004, 05:18 PM

^post em up!

pompom · 10-18-2004, 06:47 AM

i think that opium can post lyrics here. go ahead!!!!

pompom · 10-18-2004, 06:49 AM

I Think That Anyone Can Post Their Lyrics Here Cos It Would Be Interesting To See What Everyone Writes About!!!

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10-14-2004, 05:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
pompom Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 47	any band need some songs? i used to write poems and my mate said they were really good and one day i turned my poems into songs so i was lookin for a band that i could give them to so that they might actually become useful instead of just buildin up into a mountain collecting dust. one of my poems was turned into a song and was added to by a film star and now its going to be the theme tune to a music. i dont exactly know when the music is out but hopefully i'll be invited to the opening of it. i wish i had a band but no-one is interested in that at the mo so i will just keep writing.

10-14-2004, 07:25 AM	#4 (permalink)
covle Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: melbourne australia Posts: 334	post some of your stuff __________________ LIVE.LOVE.BURN.DIE. whoa...i quoted atreyu, that means im hardcore. look how hardcore i am!! thats hardcore...XXX

10-14-2004, 04:56 PM	#7 (permalink)
Opium Groupie Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 20	You have to take rhythm into consideration. Just because the words rhyme doesn't mean you're capable of turning sentences into melody. Try jotting down ideas and then twisting them into a beat. I've always worked that way, and I doubt it'll ever let anyone else down. Don't stop writing. Am I allowed to post my lyrics somewhere too, or does pompom say nay? __________________ The odds are against you.

10-14-2004, 05:18 PM	#8 (permalink)
jibber Freeskier Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Istanbul was Constantinople now it's Istanbul not Constantinople... Posts: 1,536	^post em up! __________________ What you've done becomes the judge of what you're going to do -- especially in other people's minds. When you're traveling, you are what you are right there and then. People don't have your past to hold against you. No yesterdays on the road. William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways Your toughest competitor lives in your head. Some days his name is fear, or pain, or gravity. Stomp his ass. HOOKED ON THE WHITE POWDER

10-14-2004, 06:05 AM	#2 (permalink)
pompom Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 47	come on someone post something please pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

10-14-2004, 07:16 AM	#3 (permalink)
pompom Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 47	i guess i aint good enough for no-one.

10-14-2004, 07:31 AM	#5 (permalink)
pompom Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 47	Can’t give it up…. I tear my skin deep and thick I pierce my own flesh, The wound is long and wide The blood that pours is fresh. I try to listen to the things you say But ignored the advice you gave, Dangerous is what I’ve done now I could end up in an early grave. I used sharp blades, sharp tipped points And many other sharp things, My skin all red and open wide Burns, sore and stings. No matter how hard I try I cannot give it u, A stream of red, my dripping blood Could even fill a cup. I’ll have to try to pull myself together That needs a lot of strength, But this time is to long for me I need a shorter length. I don’t know who to turn to I need to look for help, Really I can’t do this I can’t do this all by myself! I guess if try I can do it If I try hard enough, I cannot just sit here If you help me, I will not give up! pompom xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

10-14-2004, 07:32 AM	#6 (permalink)
pompom Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 47	Right and wrong Everywhere I go I feel Like everything is wrong, People are always fighting And running from where they belong. People tell me that it’s ok And that it will be alright, Even though people are hurting others All throughout the night. I look at the world we live in Which is no longer safe, It doesn’t matter where you hide There is no hiding place. This world is always changing Everyday is really tough, The streets are no place for children The others who walk them too rough. With a world full of violence What can you say is right? Who will help the needy If you will not tonight? A world full of anger People full of rage, If violence stops here Please re-write this page. pompom xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

10-18-2004, 06:47 AM	#9 (permalink)
pompom Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 47	i think that opium can post lyrics here. go ahead!!!!

10-18-2004, 06:49 AM	#10 (permalink)
pompom Music Addict Join Date: Oct 2004 Posts: 47	I Think That Anyone Can Post Their Lyrics Here Cos It Would Be Interesting To See What Everyone Writes About!!!