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RikGrimesIsDead · 11-21-2016, 10:11 AM

TATTOOED TEARS

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
All this pain and all these fears
From now on i dont see hope
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Walking around my head is hanging down
I wear the crown…
For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew
For thinking about myself
Thinking about myself and never you
But i promise from now on there aint no fears
Time to rid myself these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Every time i try to better things between us
Something always derails the good
You never back me up,You never understood
That all i ever do is for you
And to be there for you for years and years
Instead im wearing these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Written by David Smith

RikGrimesIsDead · 11-21-2016, 07:18 PM

I’M FALLING

(CHORUS)

Cause baby…..I'm falling…..I'm falling down so hard
Baby I’m calling
For help to fight this fight and hold me through the night
And never leave meeeeee
Cause baby I’m falling.

Against the cage as blows rain down upon me
Blood on my face black and blue from the beating
I can’t feel the pain anymore
Its just the way I’m feeling

(CHORUS)

I have a battle with life … oh baby its winning
Since the day you left my heads a mess and I’m quitting
I don’t want to see the light of day cause i really don’t deserve it
It will only be filled with pain
Cause baby you aint in it

I see this gun and think to myself…pull the triggerrrrr
Don't understand why people still point the fingerrrrr
Cause they don’t know me and they don’t know us
The things we went through
The way i love you

(CHORUS)

Tired of feeling alone, empty and broken
Eyes feeling heavy as i inhale the smoke in
Can’t rid this feeling of hurt and despair
Especially with the words I’m hearing
Cause i know its the haze putting my head in a daze
Makes me hurting…

(CHORUS)

I’m falling (x5)
Help me fight this fight
I’m calling (x5)
Hold me through the night

Hold me through the night…. cause baby I’m falling

Zhanteimi · 11-21-2016, 07:21 PM

"inhale the smoke in" is redundant.

Onlymac · 11-23-2016, 09:00 AM

Intriguing....
Would be nice to hear it to music. Maybe you could find a existing instrumental piece to sing it to to get an idea of how it may sound.. Just a thought.

RikGrimesIsDead · 11-23-2016, 01:53 PM

Hi peeps,
this effort is an upbeat song,imagine a calvin harris/james arthur collab?
about a girl who just makes you happy and makes you want to dance....

YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DANCE

(CHORUS)

you make me wanna dance all night to the sound of this beat with youuuuuu
look in your eyes and spin you around
fall into laughter as we hit the ground
stand up and dance all night with youuuuu

I wanna dance with you,cause baby you make my legs go crazy when you smile
and in my smoke cloud I’m so hazy,the music making me so spacey thinking about youuuuuuuuu
(thinking about youuuuuu)
(cause baby i missed you)

you make my toes curl
the minute you arrive home late from work
cause here is …….my girl
a minute longer go bezerk

(CHORUS)

cause darling i missed you and your walk
the firery attitude when you talk
i love everything about you…..
i love everything you do ……..
the way you dance your troubles away
you make the haters want to stay
with just a glance
you make me want to dance..you make me want to dance

RikGrimesIsDead · 11-23-2016, 01:59 PM

Hey peeps,
this about self doubt and not seeing a way out of feeling down and trying to rid myself of the feeling,based on past experiences......

TATTOOED TEARS

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
All this pain and all these fears
From now on i dont see no hope
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Walking around my head is hanging down
I wear the crown…
For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew
For thinking about myself
Thinking about myself and never you
But i promise from now on there aint no fears
Time to rid myself these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Every time i try to better things between us
Something always derails the good
You never back me up,You never understood
That all i ever do is for you
And to be there for you for years and years
Instead im wearing these tattooed tears

(CHORUS)

It’s truly hit me since we broke
From now on i dont see hope
Lonely nights and constant fears
Always wearing my tattooed tears

Zhanteimi · 11-23-2016, 03:28 PM

Tattooing a tear on your face might seem like a good idea in the midst of heartbreak after a nasty breakup, but I advise you wait to make that decision until you're calm.

Zhanteimi · 11-23-2016, 03:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RikGrimesIsDead

you make my legs go crazy when you smile

This lyric just seems weird to me.

You: Hey, baby.
She: *smiles*
You: *starts Riverdancing*

**Janszoon** · 11-23-2016, 03:39 PM

I was picturing it more like this:

Ol’ Qwerty Bastard · 11-23-2016, 03:55 PM

If you want to get her back then the better idea would be to tattoo her name on your face.

11-21-2016, 10:11 AM	#1 (permalink)
RikGrimesIsDead Groupie Join Date: Nov 2016 Location: Liverpool Posts: 14	RikGrimesIsDead's Collection TATTOOED TEARS (CHORUS) It’s truly hit me since we broke All this pain and all these fears From now on i dont see hope Always wearing my tattooed tears Walking around my head is hanging down I wear the crown… For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew For thinking about myself Thinking about myself and never you But i promise from now on there aint no fears Time to rid myself these tattooed tears (CHORUS) It’s truly hit me since we broke From now on i dont see hope Lonely nights and constant fears Always wearing my tattooed tears Every time i try to better things between us Something always derails the good You never back me up,You never understood That all i ever do is for you And to be there for you for years and years Instead im wearing these tattooed tears (CHORUS) It’s truly hit me since we broke From now on i dont see hope Lonely nights and constant fears Always wearing my tattooed tears Written by David Smith Last edited by RikGrimesIsDead; 11-21-2016 at 07:18 PM.

11-21-2016, 07:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
RikGrimesIsDead Groupie Join Date: Nov 2016 Location: Liverpool Posts: 14	I'm falling I’M FALLING (CHORUS) Cause baby…..I'm falling…..I'm falling down so hard Baby I’m calling For help to fight this fight and hold me through the night And never leave meeeeee Cause baby I’m falling. Against the cage as blows rain down upon me Blood on my face black and blue from the beating I can’t feel the pain anymore Its just the way I’m feeling (CHORUS) I have a battle with life … oh baby its winning Since the day you left my heads a mess and I’m quitting I don’t want to see the light of day cause i really don’t deserve it It will only be filled with pain Cause baby you aint in it I see this gun and think to myself…pull the triggerrrrr Don't understand why people still point the fingerrrrr Cause they don’t know me and they don’t know us The things we went through The way i love you (CHORUS) Tired of feeling alone, empty and broken Eyes feeling heavy as i inhale the smoke in Can’t rid this feeling of hurt and despair Especially with the words I’m hearing Cause i know its the haze putting my head in a daze Makes me hurting… (CHORUS) I’m falling (x5) Help me fight this fight I’m calling (x5) Hold me through the night Hold me through the night…. cause baby I’m falling

11-21-2016, 07:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
Zhanteimi Mord Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: Tokyo Posts: 4,873	"inhale the smoke in" is redundant. __________________ Zhanteimi LetsTalkMusic

11-23-2016, 01:53 PM	#5 (permalink)
RikGrimesIsDead Groupie Join Date: Nov 2016 Location: Liverpool Posts: 14	I wanna dance with you Hi peeps, this effort is an upbeat song,imagine a calvin harris/james arthur collab? about a girl who just makes you happy and makes you want to dance.... YOU MAKE ME WANT TO DANCE (CHORUS) you make me wanna dance all night to the sound of this beat with youuuuuu look in your eyes and spin you around fall into laughter as we hit the ground stand up and dance all night with youuuuu I wanna dance with you,cause baby you make my legs go crazy when you smile and in my smoke cloud I’m so hazy,the music making me so spacey thinking about youuuuuuuuu (thinking about youuuuuu) (cause baby i missed you) you make my toes curl the minute you arrive home late from work cause here is …….my girl a minute longer go bezerk (CHORUS) cause darling i missed you and your walk the firery attitude when you talk i love everything about you….. i love everything you do …….. the way you dance your troubles away you make the haters want to stay with just a glance you make me want to dance..you make me want to dance

11-23-2016, 01:59 PM	#6 (permalink)
RikGrimesIsDead Groupie Join Date: Nov 2016 Location: Liverpool Posts: 14	Tattooed tears Hey peeps, this about self doubt and not seeing a way out of feeling down and trying to rid myself of the feeling,based on past experiences...... TATTOOED TEARS (CHORUS) It’s truly hit me since we broke All this pain and all these fears From now on i dont see no hope Always wearing my tattooed tears Walking around my head is hanging down I wear the crown… For being the biggest piece of **** i ever knew For thinking about myself Thinking about myself and never you But i promise from now on there aint no fears Time to rid myself these tattooed tears (CHORUS) It’s truly hit me since we broke From now on i dont see hope Lonely nights and constant fears Always wearing my tattooed tears Every time i try to better things between us Something always derails the good You never back me up,You never understood That all i ever do is for you And to be there for you for years and years Instead im wearing these tattooed tears (CHORUS) It’s truly hit me since we broke From now on i dont see hope Lonely nights and constant fears Always wearing my tattooed tears

11-23-2016, 09:00 AM	#4 (permalink)
Onlymac Groupie Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 38	Intriguing.... Would be nice to hear it to music. Maybe you could find a existing instrumental piece to sing it to to get an idea of how it may sound.. Just a thought.

11-23-2016, 03:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
Zhanteimi Mord Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: Tokyo Posts: 4,873	Tattooing a tear on your face might seem like a good idea in the midst of heartbreak after a nasty breakup, but I advise you wait to make that decision until you're calm. __________________ Zhanteimi LetsTalkMusic

11-23-2016, 03:39 PM	#9 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	I was picturing it more like this: __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm