Lyrics/poetry/spoken word (fan, Cobain, memories, band, Ching)

Fenixpunk · 03-17-2005, 10:29 AM

whether in a band or not, i know that if your a fan of music chances are you got some written down somewhere. Lyrical content is as important as the rythems to me. I also believe well written lyrics can give people a pretty good idea whats goin on in someones head at the time theyre written, so, post what you got and play nice.

Fenixpunk · 03-17-2005, 10:55 AM

My Wandering Mind

Save a breath of life for me,
Ill try and help you see,
Try to help you understand,
If you save some time for me.
Ill save some time for you,
and do what i can do,
To try to make sense of everything,
when everything is through..
this time,
till then...
is it such a sin?
to break my back,
and wreck my mind
till everything is going fine?
sit back,
relax,
and then it happends again
It gains up speed and clears a path
till everyone has felt its wrath..

And when i wake up...
I dont even get a chance to see,
my mind it runs away from me again,
Its gone forever.
And when i catch up...
It gains momentum that it needs to quickly slip away from me again,
its gone forever.

Anarchy doll · 03-17-2005, 12:08 PM

she sits alone, in her head and broken home
wondering why she is all alone
she can't stand the scratching that memories bring
and can't stand the way happiness sings
why can't this life ever bring
what this needle brings when she pushes the thing
plunge in the happiness
and take a ride
give her a break from this weary life

Fenixpunk · 03-17-2005, 12:39 PM

People tell you how to live
its all youre taught to know
Its a shame you feel so comfortable
it only goes to show
that you fit perfect in their plan
to make us just like them
but when its time to bring up arms
we'll see whose gonna win..

I can hear the screams
louder as i walk closer to you
but what can i do?
I can see the lights
coming from the graves of people whove died
but what can i do?

where will you go when all your fancy coffee shops are gone?
when nothings on the television when you turn it on?
your way of lifes been redefined, your stripped of your luxuries
id love to see the look on your face when you turn out just like me.

I can hear the screams
louder as i walk closer to you
but what can i do?
I can see the lights
coming from the graves of people whove died
but what can i do?

Anarchy doll · 03-17-2005, 08:07 PM

everyone thinks it'san easy ride to fame...
everyone thinks they know you evn though they only know your name....
but when your up, there's no one you can do...
but it's when your down you need 'em
and there's no one there for you
you had it all
the day you signed your name
they say the winner who takes all...is gonna have to fall
I'm so sorry Mr. Cobain

03-17-2005, 10:29 AM	#1 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	Lyrics/poetry/spoken word whether in a band or not, i know that if your a fan of music chances are you got some written down somewhere. Lyrical content is as important as the rythems to me. I also believe well written lyrics can give people a pretty good idea whats goin on in someones head at the time theyre written, so, post what you got and play nice. __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed

03-17-2005, 10:55 AM	#2 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	My Wandering Mind Save a breath of life for me, Ill try and help you see, Try to help you understand, If you save some time for me. Ill save some time for you, and do what i can do, To try to make sense of everything, when everything is through.. this time, till then... is it such a sin? to break my back, and wreck my mind till everything is going fine? sit back, relax, and then it happends again It gains up speed and clears a path till everyone has felt its wrath.. And when i wake up... I dont even get a chance to see, my mind it runs away from me again, Its gone forever. And when i catch up... It gains momentum that it needs to quickly slip away from me again, its gone forever. __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed

03-17-2005, 12:39 PM	#4 (permalink)
Fenixpunk The Erroneous Hoodlum Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: West Side Phoenix Posts: 2,057	People tell you how to live its all youre taught to know Its a shame you feel so comfortable it only goes to show that you fit perfect in their plan to make us just like them but when its time to bring up arms we'll see whose gonna win.. I can hear the screams louder as i walk closer to you but what can i do? I can see the lights coming from the graves of people whove died but what can i do? where will you go when all your fancy coffee shops are gone? when nothings on the television when you turn it on? your way of lifes been redefined, your stripped of your luxuries id love to see the look on your face when you turn out just like me. I can hear the screams louder as i walk closer to you but what can i do? I can see the lights coming from the graves of people whove died but what can i do? __________________ This message has been approved by Shawn Erroneous - The Declaimed

03-17-2005, 12:08 PM	#3 (permalink)
Anarchy doll punk rock mommy Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in my mind Posts: 660	she sits alone, in her head and broken home wondering why she is all alone she can't stand the scratching that memories bring and can't stand the way happiness sings why can't this life ever bring what this needle brings when she pushes the thing plunge in the happiness and take a ride give her a break from this weary life

03-17-2005, 08:07 PM	#5 (permalink)
Anarchy doll punk rock mommy Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: in my mind Posts: 660	everyone thinks it'san easy ride to fame... everyone thinks they know you evn though they only know your name.... but when your up, there's no one you can do... but it's when your down you need 'em and there's no one there for you you had it all the day you signed your name they say the winner who takes all...is gonna have to fall I'm so sorry Mr. Cobain