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Hi, Bryan, I like the comment you made in someone's thread where you wrote, "I like that you're not afraid to NOT rhyme all the time." Your comment reminded me that I should try to vary my rhyme scheme more often and also vary the type of rhyming. For example, instead of using perfect rhymes ("dye" rhymes perfectly with "sigh"), I should try using more assonance ("lake" and "fate" share the repeated vowel sound). Using assonance instead of forcing myself to use perfectly rhyming words all the time would let me discuss many more topics while still rhyming some of the sounds in my songs. --Erica