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Old 03-13-2017, 01:24 PM   #1 (permalink)
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When your opening description rates a "tl:dr",
you probably can't expect even a medium-
sized journal entry to make any mark.
It's always been a problem here.
I'd recommend the attention-challenged
tweet-size journal, but it would only
encourage lazy reading and minimal thought.
Yes but look at who we're talking about. If it hasn't got pictures of people going POW! POW! TAKE THAT YOU CAPED CRIMINAL! he don't want to know.

Anyway, it's not aimed at him. He has journals (of sorts) of his own.
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What color is that deer? Now spell out "tldr" out loud.
yeah yeah, hilarious. Go read another few comics, Bat-boy. The grown-ups are trying to have a meaningful conversation.
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Old 03-13-2017, 01:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Yes but look at who we're talking about. If it hasn't got pictures of people going POW! POW! TAKE THAT YOU CAPED CRIMINAL! he don't want to know.

Anyway, it's not aimed at him. He has journals (of sorts) of his own.
A wall of text as an intro is unnecessary when the basic concept can be summed up in quite possibly one sentence.

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yeah yeah, hilarious. Go read another few comics, Bat-boy. The grown-ups are trying to have a meaningful conversation.
You read comics too, moron.
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I think the fact that you consider those few sentences a wall of text says more about your attention span than it does about my writing, idiot.


Anyway, ignore the Bat, for he is short of attention and bereft of ideas, and quick to tear down anyone else's just so he can be the centre of attention. His words are empty, and we do not hear them.
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Old 03-13-2017, 04:07 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I think the fact that you consider those few sentences a wall of text says more about your attention span than it does about my writing, idiot.
There are 30 sentences in the OP, many of them run-on.
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There is only one bright spot and that is the growing habit of disgruntled men of dynamiting factories and power-stations; I hope that, encouraged now as ‘patriotism’, may remain a habit! But it won’t do any good, if it is not universal.
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There are 30 sentences in the OP, many of them run-on.
What do they run on? Irish Whiskey?
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