I think the fact that you consider those few sentences a wall of text says more about your attention span than it does about my writing, idiot.

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Anyway, ignore the Bat, for he is short of attention and bereft of ideas, and quick to tear down anyone else's just so he can be the centre of attention. His words are empty, and we do not hear them.

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Flesch–Kincaid Readability Scale (66.9%):

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There are 30 sentences in the OP, many of them run-on.

What do they run on? Irish Whiskey?

I, for one, think it's a good concept for a journal and I thought the introductory paragraph was well-written and lengthed perfectly.

Yeah, I mean it wasn't even that long. It was all split into paragraphs so it was easy to digest. Good job man, as always.

My rating - 9/10

Hey, we should just review Trollheart's posts in this journal

I already do that in his other journals. So I'm in.

So your idea was to make an Internet forum

Freedom

By the end of his trek, he was famished, but starving more internally for answers than more proper forms of nourishment. "Will the time ever come? Must I be stuck in this constant wheel of unproductivity?" His inner monologues plaguing his judgement, and making his thirst for knowledge ever the greater. Oh, how cold it was! Aside from his mental starvation came the biting frost of the outdoors, miles away from modern comforts such as controlled heating. The temptation of just giving up, and creating his resting place was interrupted each time it came up with a slap of reality: his goal could be easily reached with very little effort. Yet, the quick solution's appeal was ever present in the back of his thoughts. "Bah! Fuck it!" Every small attempt he made at approaching the first steps towards the goal ended swiftly and without fruition. But

Goddamn I need to finish this paper