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03-03-2013, 06:36 PM | #1 (permalink) |
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Poetry
Poetry is arguably a dying art form. I happen to enjoy it. I'm not a fan of the inaccessible works you may get in your lit class-- not that the stuff isn't anthologized for a good reason.
I am not a poet, just a fan. Even if I did write, I doubt I would have the balls to share it, so kudos to those who do. I really enjoy modern/contemporary poets and their works. There are several literary magazines and on-line publications with a lot of good stuff from some very relevant poets. I'm creating this thread to share some poems that I love. PLEASE feel free to add any you please or share any poets you like. Some of my favorites: Pablo Neruda Kim Addonizio Ash Bowen Sylvia Plath Emily Dickinson William Meredith, just to list a few This is one of my all-time favorites. It's the actual poet, Geoffrey Brock(who teaches at Arkansas), reading the poem, and the crude animation is amusing. Below the video is the actual poem. It was so simple: you came back to me And I was happy. Nothing seemed to matter But that. That you had gone away from me And lived for days with him—it didn’t matter. That I had been left to care for our old dog And house alone—couldn’t have mattered less! On all this, you and I and our happy dog Agreed. We slept. The world was worriless. I woke in the morning, brimming with old joys Till the fact-checker showed up, late, for work And started in: Item: it’s years, not days. Item: you had no dog. Item: she isn’t back, In fact, she just remarried. And oh yes, item: you Left her, remember? I did? I did. (I do.) Geoffrey Brock
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03-03-2013, 06:50 PM | #2 (permalink) |
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I couldn't help but to share one more this evening. This is a freakin awesome poem. There is no doubt that in his time, Pablo, pulled more ass than a toilet seat.
“Sonnet XVII I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz, or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off. I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul. I love you as the plant that never blooms but carries in itself the light of hidden flowers; thanks to your love a certain solid fragrance, risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body. I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride; so I love you because I know no other way than this: where I does not exist, nor you, so close that your hand on my chest is my hand, so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep. ” ― Pablo Neruda
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03-04-2013, 07:57 PM | #3 (permalink) |
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Really nice stuff man/ woman! Keep posting please!
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03-05-2013, 03:08 PM | #5 (permalink) |
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^^ Neruda has many great poems, this one happens to be my favorite. His book of love sonnets is pretty amazing. Sonnet form isn't the easiest to write in and it's all been translated from Spanish. Imagine what is lost in translation. Neruda was pretty loved and famous. He's Chilean, supported communism, and served as a diplomat. There is a movie about him which I happen to enjoy: Il Postino.
And I'm a woman. And I'm afraid I've revealed myself to be a huge poetry nerd This poem is a little dark and menacing. I like a strong last line. I found it in Best New Poets 2011. Jennifer Luebbers Recess Spring, and a man took a girl to the woods by the schoolyard. Police hovered in helicopters; they hemmed the trees in tape. The recess monitor circled with a bronze bell, its rusty clapper a tongue to warn. The jump rope was a thick braid touched to the pavement, and a choir of mouths sang Cinderella, dressed in yella, Went downtown to meet a fella. How I wanted to be the girl gone missing. How I wanted the world to watch. I thought to go to the woods in white, weave a chain of daisies for my throat, a garland of dandelion to stain my hands, a crown of pollen to seed my hair. To tie my wrists with ropes to a tree. To wait for the police, the priest, the teacher, my father-- any dangerous man who might come to save. Who among them would unbind my wrists? Who among them would bear the knife?
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03-05-2013, 03:26 PM | #6 (permalink) |
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One more from Best New Poets 2011. Another poem on the darker side. The theme today seems to be child abuse.
Ash Bowen How Gravity Hated Us My sister was the first to learn how gravity hated our family--a spinning plunge into the gorge of echoy quartz when she failed to cling to air like Father imagined. Her hollow bones made him certain she'd been born for flight so he'd splayed her among the tools of his shop and stripped the rivets from her body, took her inside his shower and shaved her nose into a beak. Her talons scratched for balance as she crept across her perch, eyes rolling over the canyons as she stumbled into free-fall and Earth climbed up to meet her. She rose, coughing teeth into her palms, shivering impact rubble from her shoulders, trembling in the feathery shadow of our father whose fingers were already fitting me with wings.
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03-06-2013, 05:28 PM | #7 (permalink) |
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How to write an erotic letter
This is great. I love the letter to the father.
Anthony Farrington HOW TO WRITE AN EROTIC LETTER You must empty yourself first. Erase everything you’ve written. If you’re naked, revise all your clothes back on. Anyway, they’re all you have. What matters is the taking them off. Begin with a title “Concerning insatiable carnal urges.” Attach a handwritten note that says, Keep your hair down and If you come here, I’ll tell you something awful about someone perfect. Scathing and lovely to hear. Remember, each time, each letter is an entire love affair, say ‘A’ is for almost. ‘B’ is the emptiness that follows. The letter ‘O’ is what the body believes. If she writes in a letter, Sometimes our bodies are too much for us, quote her. How she turns you on turns her on. You can quote me on that. I am remembering the sweep of your hair, the light on your breasts, your beautiful eyes expanding; I am remembering the slickness inside you— how wet, how deliciously warm. I think of your uncontrollable breath; I think of your nipples kissing my chest; I think of your mouth on my neck and the sweet taste of your tongue in my mouth. Set aside nothing for later. Call this, I was kissing and sucking and wanting so badly to **** you silly, silly. And erase it. But enjoy it first. Feel free to write a pretend letter to her father. Quote from it: “Dear her father, Sir, we are sorry to inform you, sir, of the mysterious demise of your daughter. It seems she was somehow— sorry to say this indelicately—****ed to death…obviously a scandalous affair. Ropes and long-necked bottles and, oh, we mustn’t go on. A man was dead too, sir—exhaustion it seems or dementia. With sincere regrets, I am yours.” If she uses the word **** in her letters you use the word **** but at the end of the letter only. This is not prudery, it is teasing and she will appreciate it. I want my face in your hair, your perfume in my breath, my finger tips softly touching the sides of your ribs, your waist, your thighs, your breast, your face—what is important here, in this letter, your hand must touch her, in this letter, so she wants, over and over, what is not there. If you’re foolish enough to write Oh God prematurely, you deserve what you don’t get. As a cautionary measure, delete all references to god: Jesus it feels so good and Holy ****. Consider keeping: God, you are so slick; so goddamn delicious. But you’ve already used slick once. Now three times. There is nothing wrong with I want to hear your voice coming and coming but admit, it’s a one-shot phrase. Damp cotton will open caves in your mind. Promise her: I need you electric in my mouth. Write: Concerning the art of seduction and leave it at that. Tease her: Truth or dare? End before you’ve said everything. Realize everything you are, in this letter, precedes you— which is the loneliness of writing. What you want is never now. That’s the essence of desire. What she reads is always past; that’s despair. Think about how— if she could—she would swallow the world (pillow and all) take it all inside— all of you—so it could come shattering out again. But don’t fool yourself, this letter needs to be filled with sorrow. Write: Sometimes I wish I could be in your body so I could feel what you feel. Sometimes, I wish you could be in my body—your own name amazingly on the tip of your new tongue, the smell of you (I mean me) in your fresh mind, seeing your old body arch away from your new body, hearing seeing feeling what was once you hold her breath; hearing her becoming, coming apart all around you. And then your own foreign release beyond your whole body. The cracking— it feels so open—this desire, almost to weep. Then weep. In the space of a letter you once were.
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03-07-2013, 05:56 PM | #8 (permalink) |
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you do not know me if you think i will not kill you
This poem is GREAT. Read it. Another love poem. My spouse and I have a similar agreement. My favorite line: "I tell you you do not/know me if you think I will not/kill you."
The Promise by Sharon Olds With the second drink, at the restaurant, holding hands on the bare table, we are at it again, renewing our promise to kill each other. You are drinking gin, night-blue juniper berry dissolving in your body, I am drinking Fume, chewing its fragrant dirt and smoke, we are taking on earth, we are part soil already, and wherever we are, we are also in our bed, fitted, naked, closely along each other, half passed out after love, drifting back and forth across the border of consciousness, our bodies buoyant, clasped. Your hand tightens on the table. You're a little afraid I'll chicken out. What you do not want is to lie in a hospital bed for a year after a stroke, without being able to think or die, you do not want to be tied to a chair like a prim grandmother, cursing. The room is dim around us, ivory globes, pink curtains, bound at the waist - and outside, a weightless, luminous, lifted-up summer twilight. I tell you you do not know me if you think I will not kill you. Think how we have floated together eye to eye, nipple to nipple, sex to sex, the halves of a creature drifting up to the lip of matter and over it - you know me from the bright, blood- flecked delivery room, if a lion had you in its jaws I would attack it, if the ropes binding your soul are your own wrists, I will cut them.
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“What Do Women Want?”
By Kim Addonizio I want a red dress. I want it flimsy and cheap, I want it too tight, I want to wear it until someone tears it off me. I want it sleeveless and backless, this dress, so no one has to guess what’s underneath. I want to walk down the street past Thrifty’s and the hardware store with all those keys glittering in the window, past Mr. and Mrs. Wong selling day-old donuts in their café, past the Guerra brothers slinging pigs from the truck and onto the dolly, hoisting the slick snouts over their shoulders. I want to walk like I’m the only woman on earth and I can have my pick. I want that red dress bad. I want it to confirm your worst fears about me, to show you how little I care about you or anything except what I want. When I find it, I’ll pull that garment from its hanger like I’m choosing a body to carry me into this world, through the birth-cries and the love-cries too, and I’ll wear it like bones, like skin, it’ll be the goddamned dress they bury me in.
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