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The Batlord 11-19-2016 12:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Lucem Ferre (Post 1770858)
Yeah. I didn't even realize I was typing probably cause. But I will call it probably cause from now on.

Probably cause you're stupid.

Lucem Ferre 11-19-2016 12:29 PM

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Originally Posted by the batlord (Post 1770862)
probable cause you're stupid.

ftfy

Frownland 11-19-2016 12:44 PM

The call was probably cause in itself I think.

djchameleon 11-19-2016 04:43 PM

I can't wait for this weekend to be over. I miss wifi ��

Paedantic Basterd 11-19-2016 09:57 PM

I've been playing around with screenwriting as a hobby for a while now. In the last month I started to write my first feature-length script. I've got three major characters, each with a complete character arc mapped out from start to finish, and I've got the major events planned, but there's a problem. After putting pen to paper (so to speak), my "feature-length" script is roughly 50 pages. Typically a feature of this nature is more like 120 pages (at ~1 minute per page).

Soooo now I'm like, wha'd I do wrong? Is it possible to get to the point too quickly in a story? Am I destined to write for television rather than film? Am I missing some kind of subplot to resolve in Act II?

I lost the motivation to finish it after realizing there was something fundamentally wrong in my structure and pacing for it to be so short.

Blank. 11-19-2016 10:23 PM

So I started a duo with a friend of mine, I write the music, she does the vocals. I'm excited about this, she has such a wonderful voice.



I'm a little concerned she won't like my more experimental approach to music. And if you guys contribute again, I feel like she won't like what you all bring to the table. But should be interesting.

Justthefacts 11-20-2016 01:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Paedantic Basterd (Post 1770951)
I've been playing around with screenwriting as a hobby for a while now. In the last month I started to write my first feature-length script. I've got three major characters, each with a complete character arc mapped out from start to finish, and I've got the major events planned, but there's a problem. After putting pen to paper (so to speak), my "feature-length" script is roughly 50 pages. Typically a feature of this nature is more like 120 pages (at ~1 minute per page).

Soooo now I'm like, wha'd I do wrong? Is it possible to get to the point too quickly in a story? Am I destined to write for television rather than film? Am I missing some kind of subplot to resolve in Act II?

I lost the motivation to finish it after realizing there was something fundamentally wrong in my structure and pacing for it to be so short.

Shoot for films. Don't be discouraged enough to settle for television, (even though some TV is good I suppose) and make great films the rest of your life.

The Batlord 11-20-2016 03:19 AM

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Originally Posted by Paedantic Basterd (Post 1770951)
I've been playing around with screenwriting as a hobby for a while now. In the last month I started to write my first feature-length script. I've got three major characters, each with a complete character arc mapped out from start to finish, and I've got the major events planned, but there's a problem. After putting pen to paper (so to speak), my "feature-length" script is roughly 50 pages. Typically a feature of this nature is more like 120 pages (at ~1 minute per page).

Soooo now I'm like, wha'd I do wrong? Is it possible to get to the point too quickly in a story? Am I destined to write for television rather than film? Am I missing some kind of subplot to resolve in Act II?

I lost the motivation to finish it after realizing there was something fundamentally wrong in my structure and pacing for it to be so short.

Needs either a romantic subplot or a monkey.

grindy 11-20-2016 04:01 AM

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Originally Posted by The Batlord (Post 1770974)
Needs either a romantic subplot or a monkey.

You can combine those two.

Mindy 11-20-2016 05:15 AM

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Originally Posted by DwnWthVwls (Post 1770091)
Isnt that what facebook messenger is for?

i dont have many people on facebook anymore and im talking about new people that ive never met. :shycouch:


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