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View Poll Results: Which is your favorite?
Not There 1 10.00%
In the Cold, Cold Night 0 0%
Slow Burn 3 30.00%
Ghosts Aren't Real, But Other Things Are 5 50.00%
Unseeing Eye 1 10.00%
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Old 11-02-2015, 08:39 AM   #31 (permalink)
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My vote goes to 'Ghosts Aren't Real, But Other Things Are'.
Sure, the ending kinda comes out of left field (I get the symbolism and I get the red herrings, but still...), but it was overall well written, fun to read and, while being a 'classic' horror story in a way, still doesn't feel threadbare.
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Old 11-02-2015, 10:56 AM   #32 (permalink)
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How do you guys feel about Unseeing Eye? Personally, I thought it was fun trying to figure out what was going on. It kinda sounds like someone recounting a bad acid flashback that they had while walking down the street.
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Old 11-02-2015, 11:08 AM   #33 (permalink)
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How do you guys feel about Unseeing Eye? Personally, I thought it was fun trying to figure out what was going on. It kinda sounds like someone recounting a bad acid flashback that they had while walking down the street.
At times it felt like it could grow into something powerful, but it was overall to impressionist and vague to really have much of an impact. Trimming it a little might have helped.
Sorry Frown!
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Old 11-03-2015, 11:29 AM   #34 (permalink)
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Keep on voting, for the glory of horror!

Anyway, the next contest is going to be a theme-less free for all. If you want to start writing your stories now, keep in mind that it's anything-goes, so let your imagination go crazy.
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Old 11-03-2015, 03:58 PM   #35 (permalink)
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I can understand that few people are voting. I'm usually far too lazy to read a bunch of amateur stories on the internet myself. But it seems not even all the authors have voted yet.
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Old 11-06-2015, 03:32 PM   #36 (permalink)
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Alright, this has gone on long enough. Whichever story has the most votes by the start of next week wins.
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Old 11-09-2015, 02:36 PM   #37 (permalink)
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Someone break the tie.
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Old 11-11-2015, 04:14 PM   #38 (permalink)
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So, Slow Burn and The Story With Too Long of a Title both win! If the authors want to, they can reveal themselves now. You guys have all probably already guessed which story was mine, though.
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Old 11-11-2015, 04:20 PM   #39 (permalink)
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So, Slow Burn and The Story With Too Long of a Title both win! If the authors want to, they can reveal themselves now. You guys have all probably already guessed which story was mine, though.
I wasn't at all able to guess which was written by whom. I'm terrible at picking up even the most obvious clues.

I'm pretty sure though, that mine was kinda obvious.
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My story was Ghosts Aren't Real, But Other Things Are.
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