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Old 09-14-2014, 11:16 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Dude, come on. A sentence in parenthesis still has to follow basic grammar rules. You must capitalize the first word, and use proper punctuation (you missed the comma after "Also", and the period after "shown".) You have failed this city.
Um, what? Are you addressing me or Pet Sounds? If me, then how can misspelling the word "lose" be wrong? I'll just assume it's directed at PS.
What are you talking about? I never said anything about you misspelling the word "lose". I was correcting the complete cock-up that you'd made of a parenthetical sentence. \/\/\/

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Sorry PS; you missed one! Semper Correctis! (also there should be an "and" in between his job and worked, as shown)
Since the parentheses are not actually in a sentence, "also" needs to be capitalized (not to mention that it needs a comma), and you also neglected to use punctuation at the end. Cock-up.

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Point of order: I think it's up to Unknown Soldier to confirm if his journal capitalises the word "decibels", as strictly speaking (Roxy! Settle down...) that word would only be capitalised if it were at the beginning of a sentence or was for instance the title of a band.
He does capitalize it. Check the journal section. Oh, and you should have used a comma before "for instance". I shall beat you into the dirt, Trollheart, just like I did to DwnWthVwls.


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I agree with the general ideas of Janszoon post. However, I would consider HipHop my main genre. It's not something I always listen to but it's the one genre that has always been a part of my life.
I forget whether or not I've already crushed your spirit, so I'm going to Grammar Nazi you anyway. I've seen "hop hop" written with a space, or with a hyphen, but never without either one or the other. I'm also going to say that you need a comma in-between "to" and "but" in your third sentence.


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