Thought: When the night comes

parakletos · 08-31-2014, 06:15 AM

When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest

**Janszoon** · 08-31-2014, 08:46 AM

You wish to smell someone's chest?

**Exo** · 08-31-2014, 10:23 AM

Smells like fresh boobies in here.

parakletos · 08-31-2014, 11:37 AM

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Originally Posted by Janszoon

You wish to smell someone's chest?

Thought is kind of writing close to poems but I'm beginner, nice to meet you.

parakletos · 08-31-2014, 11:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Exo_

Smells like fresh boobies in here.

May be smells of love

Black Francis · 08-31-2014, 12:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by parakletos

When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest

if you want to show your poems use the writing section if you want to be taken seriously.

parakletos · 08-31-2014, 12:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Black Francis

if you want to show your poems use the writing section if you want to be taken seriously.

I found song writing section, but I think it's not for beginners like me but I'll try it.

Black Francis · 08-31-2014, 01:19 PM

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Originally Posted by parakletos

I found song writing section, but I think it's not for beginners like me but I'll try it.

It's not just for songs it's also for poems.
Don't be afraid to post them just cause you're just a beginner we all have to start somewhere and we don't start by being great at it that's something you build up to once you start writing constantly.

im not a very good poet myself but i share my stuff and try to learn something from the critiques ppl give me.

FishlessExistence · 08-31-2014, 11:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Janszoon

You wish to smell someone's chest?

You... Don't?

GuD · 09-01-2014, 12:02 AM

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Originally Posted by parakletos

When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest

ME TOO

WANNA BANG

CALL ME

WD is a horny perv. been warned, you have.

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