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Old 03-24-2012, 08:22 AM   #21 (permalink)
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Fantastic. All the pills you can eat. I feel like Venus risen from the sea.
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Old 03-24-2012, 08:34 AM   #22 (permalink)
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Old 03-24-2012, 08:43 AM   #23 (permalink)
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Nice story!

It was pretty convincing at first. I mean, that sort of stuff could happen. Towards the end with the noise and the suicide, it was obviously a made up horror-story. Writing something believable I guess is the true creepypasta challenge, but not a bad attempt I thought.
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Old 03-24-2012, 01:26 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Thanks. As i said, i'd post it somewhere with more of a 14 year old demographic. its almost summer so....


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Nice story!

It was pretty convincing at first. I mean, that sort of stuff could happen. Towards the end with the noise and the suicide, it was obviously a made up horror-story. Writing something believable I guess is the true creepypasta challenge, but not a bad attempt I thought.
Thank ya sir. Yeah.. creepy and believable creepypasta certainly is a challenge. I figured i'd give it a go though.
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Old 03-24-2012, 04:24 PM   #25 (permalink)
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My favorite part was you not specifying the exact method of suicide. THAT was the creepiest part for me.
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Old 03-25-2012, 07:54 AM   #26 (permalink)
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I was really bored, figured i'd try my hand at creepypasta. creepypasta usually sucks anyways. Maybe I'll post this in a forum with more of a 14 year old demographic.
What's that supposed to mean? What did you actually try your hand at? You lifted the gist of a classic Edgar Allen Poe story / The Ring and dressed it up within the confines of an online 'relationship'.

Who's acting like a 14 year old?
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Old 03-25-2012, 07:55 AM   #27 (permalink)
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Fantastic. All the pills you can eat. I feel like Venus risen from the sea.
or, more appropriately, a Phoenix from the ashes
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Old 03-25-2012, 05:41 PM   #28 (permalink)
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What's that supposed to mean? What did you actually try your hand at? You lifted the gist of a classic Edgar Allen Poe story / The Ring and dressed it up within the confines of an online 'relationship'.

Who's acting like a 14 year old?
Wow, you're an idiot. i'm sorry but you are. The tell tale heart has nothing in common with this story. Why? because it featured a sound? I guess Steven Kings "the langoliers" ripped off the tell tale heart too. The tell tale heart is about a guilty mans conscious driving him insane. This isn't about that at all. There is no deeper meaning to this other than, just to be creepy. Whether you found it so or not, others did so it had its intended effect. If you're going to try to insult someone, you should probably ensure they're not significantly more intelligent then you.
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Old 03-25-2012, 06:59 PM   #29 (permalink)
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OP, you need to get a life, did you ever actually meet this girl, you loser? No, you're convinced you fell in love with someone you messaged a few times online.
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Wow, you're an idiot.
Cool it with the name calling, guys.

I could see this story being one of those annoying FB chain comments if it included something about dying had I not copied and pasted it.
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Old 03-25-2012, 07:47 PM   #30 (permalink)
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Cool it with the name calling, guys.

I could see this story being one of those annoying FB chain comments if it included something about dying had I not copied and pasted it.
they started it >:[ , but fine.. i'll ignore the sad miserable people that have nothing better to do in life than try to drag others down to their level of misery.
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