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Old 12-26-2011, 04:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Snowflakes become one
As they float through the wind
Into a starless night
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Old 12-26-2011, 05:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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4/5
Nice imagery and not a word out of place.

A cool breeze flutters
through the leaves of the olives
My tears dry in the air
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Old 12-26-2011, 06:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Not a haiku.

perplexed and confused
it's discombobulating
check your syllables
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Old 12-26-2011, 06:17 PM   #4 (permalink)
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he followed the rules
and made a haiku oh yeah
five out of five bro
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Old 12-26-2011, 06:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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4/5
Nice.You followed the rules too !


using just three lines

Il Duce must post like this

counting syllables
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Old 12-26-2011, 07:20 PM   #6 (permalink)
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8/10

A fairly rare post
Rarer still, lisnaholic
This dude is the ****
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Old 12-26-2011, 07:34 PM   #7 (permalink)
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You guys are using 3-5-3 haikus? Schmucks! it's 5-7-5 or nothin!

I touch myself when
I think of you baby
Locked in my cellar
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Old 12-26-2011, 07:46 PM   #8 (permalink)
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You didnt rate mine you goon!
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Old 12-26-2011, 07:53 PM   #9 (permalink)
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A fairly rare post
Rarer still, lisnaholic
This dude is the ****
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7 or 8 out of 10, depending on how many syllables there are in *****



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You guys are using 3-5-3 haikus? Schmucks! it's 5-7-5 or nothin!

I touch myself when
I think of you baby
Locked in my cellar
^ 6/10. Counting out on my fingers, I think you dropped a syllable from your middle line. Also, I think the previous ones log in at 5-7-5. That was certainly my intention.
What would the ancient Japanese masters have to say about the topic of your haiku ?


nice guy, Doctor Soft

something about his father

I can`t quite recall
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Old 12-26-2011, 07:56 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Two syllables... I think I forgot I was doing 5-7-5.
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